Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and use past tense consistently; avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (e.g., who you rode with, where you rode, or a short memory). Keep it within 1–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, and it helped me feel independent and active.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific, relevant reasons using correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid vague or unclear phrases. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences: one for your opinion and one for supporting reasons (e.g., cost, convenience, environment).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and cheap to maintain. Additionally, many people use them for short trips and to save fuel, which makes them a practical choice.

× Yes, when when I was a child. I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeats 'when' and mixes past and present tense. The question asks about the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so responses should use past tense. Change 'I have a bike' to 'I had a bike' and remove the duplicated 'when'. Use a single clear past-tense sentence: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I do. I think the price uh that is popular in my country because it's very, very young and very easy to produce and uh study this, you know this. Energy so that I got in.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country because they are inexpensive to produce and use, and they are easy to maintain.

Multiple issues: incorrect subject reference ('the price that is popular' is ungrammatical), inappropriate adjective 'young' for objects, and unclear fragments. According to the tense and question ('Do you think bikes are popular?'), present tense is appropriate. Use plural 'bikes' and plural verbs and pronouns for general statements. Replace 'young' with 'inexpensive' or 'cheap' and clarify reasons: 'inexpensive to produce and use' and 'easy to maintain'. Remove fragmented phrases and filler words. Suggestions: plan the response, use clear subjects and verbs, avoid filler 'uh' and redundant clauses, and match plural nouns with plural verbs.