Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản và phát âm; trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tối đa thêm 1–2 câu phụ giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh hỏi lại giám khảo và cố gắng dùng thì quá khứ đúng (had) cùng danh từ đúng (bike).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that I rode to my friend's house and around the neighborhood almost every day.

Sugestão: Cải thiện thì và trật tự từ; dùng linking words để rõ ràng (e.g., in the past / nowadays). Nêu cụ thể hơn về người dùng xe đạp và mục đích sử dụng; tránh từ mơ hồ như "find a few cheap" và sửa ngữ pháp (they used to be used / people used them).

Exemplo: I think bicycles used to be very popular in my country. In the past, many people used them to travel to work or to school because they were inexpensive and convenient for short distances.

× Yes, I have a back when I were child. What do you want to talk about?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. What do you want to talk about?

Student used incorrect pronouns and verb forms: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child'; 'back' is a typo for 'bike'; 'were' is incorrect for first person singular in past tense and should be 'was'. Also 'child' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events (had, was) and check word choice ('bike').

× I think bikes are quite popular in my country at the past.

✓ I thought bikes were quite popular in my country in the past.

The phrase mixes present tense 'I think' with 'at the past' which is incorrect. To refer to past popularity, use past tense 'I thought' or keep present and say 'in the past' correctly. 'At the past' is not idiomatic; use 'in the past'. Suggestion: choose consistent tense and use idiomatic time expressions ('in the past').

× At the past they use is usually to go to school, to go to work, or just uh, find a few cheap.

✓ In the past they were usually used to go to school, to go to work, or just to travel cheaply.

This sentence has multiple issues: 'At the past' should be 'In the past' (preposition error). 'They use is usually' is ungrammatical; passive 'were usually used' or active 'they usually used them' is needed. The phrase 'find a few cheap' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'travel cheaply' or 'find something cheap'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'in', correct voice/verb form, and a clear adverb ('cheaply') or phrase ('find something cheap').