Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific detail (where or with whom) using a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition and filler.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood every afternoon with my friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and then support it with organized, specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, moreover) and avoid fillers. Mention one or two concrete reasons (health, cost, traffic) and a brief example or result.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and good for health. For example, many people cycle to work to save money and to get exercise, which also helps reduce traffic congestion.

× Yes, of course I have a bike.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike.

The question asks about having a bike when the student was a child (past time). The verb should be in the past tense to match the time reference. Change have to had to indicate past possession. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when the time reference is in the past (e.g., 'When I was a child I had...').

× When I am a child, I really enjoy bicycling.

✓ When I was a child, I really enjoyed bicycling.

The clause 'When I was a child' refers to the past, so both the time clause verb (be) and the main clause verb should be in the past tense. 'Am' and 'enjoy' are present-tense forms; change to 'was' and 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: Match the tense of the subordinate time clause and the main clause for past events: 'When I was..., I ...ed.'.

× Yes, of course bikes are very common in my country because uh, if those of some health benefits like umm, some people think so burns their calories and some other benefits a lot of related to health.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are very common in my country because they have some health benefits; some people think they help burn calories and provide many other health-related benefits.

Multiple issues relate to tense and sentence structure but primarily the verbs and pronouns are incorrect for the intended general present meaning. Use present simple for general facts: 'they have', 'people think', 'they help burn'. Also fix unclear fragments: 'those of some health benefits' is ungrammatical and needs a clear subject and verb; 'a lot of related to health' should be 'many other health-related benefits.' Suggestion: For general truths use present simple and keep sentence structure clear: subject + verb + object, and use 'they' to refer to 'bikes.'