Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, sentence structure and completeness. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses (use past simple for past facts) and articles (a/an/the). Avoid redundancies and finish the thought.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I loved riding, so I often borrowed a bicycle from my neighbour and practised riding in the park after school. That experience helped me become confident on two wheels.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to add reasons or examples. Correct word choice (ride, not write), article usage, and finish the comparison or reason. Be specific about who uses bikes and for what purposes.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people ride bicycles to commute short distances because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and shopkeepers often cycle to save time and avoid traffic.

× Actually I don't have a bike when I was child, but I love bicycling and in my childhood I usually used to play a bicycle which was owned by my neighbor. So I.

✓ Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I loved bicycling and in my childhood I usually used my neighbor's bicycle.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb choices: 'don't have' (present) conflicts with 'when I was a child' (past). Use simple past 'didn't have'. 'I love bicycling' should be past when referring to childhood: 'I loved bicycling'. 'Usually used to play a bicycle' is incorrect phrasing: use 'usually used my neighbor's bicycle' or 'usually rode my neighbor's bicycle'. Also possessive 'my neighbor's' is clearer than 'which was owned by my neighbor'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past habits and use correct verbs for riding a bicycle. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, of course I believe that bikes are very popular among in my country as everyone like to write a bike or bicycle and it's very convenient to use and effective way to use a bike for a small.

✓ Yes, of course I believe that bikes are very popular in my country, as everyone likes to ride a bike or bicycle, and it's a very convenient and effective way to travel short distances.

Multiple errors: 'popular among in my country' should be 'popular in my country' (remove 'among'). Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone like' should be 'everyone likes' because 'everyone' is singular. 'write a bike' is a wrong verb; use 'ride a bike'. The phrase 'effective way to use a bike for a small' is unclear; intended meaning is 'effective way to travel short distances' or 'for short trips'. Also add articles: 'a very convenient and effective way'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, correct verb 'ride', ensure subject-verb agreement, and express 'short distances' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:11