Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a better score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., ride, learn, neighbourhood).

Exemplo: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was six, and I used to cycle around my neighbourhood every weekend. Because it was small and light, I felt confident practicing longer rides with my friends.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question and gives a supporting detail, but it is slightly informal and repetitive. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details or reasons, and linking words to make it coherent. Vary vocabulary (e.g., prevalent, widespread, commute) and avoid repeating phrases like "in my country."

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In fact, they are more common than cars, especially in urban areas, because many people find cycling cheaper and quicker for short commutes. For example, during rush hour you can see thousands of cyclists using dedicated lanes.

× Yeah, bikes are very much popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country.

The phrase 'very much popular' is incorrect in standard English; 'popular' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' (an adverb), not 'very much'. Use 'very popular' to intensify the adjective. Suggestion: say 'very popular' or 'quite popular'.

× There are more bikes than cars roaming around the city in my country.

✓ There are more bikes than cars on the streets of my city/country.

The original sentence is understandable but 'roaming around the city' is awkward for vehicles; also maintain plural agreement (bikes/cars) which is correct. Recommended correction improves natural phrasing: use 'on the streets' or 'in the city' and optionally specify 'in my city' or 'in my country' depending on meaning. Ensure plural nouns remain plural as here.