Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and use past tense consistently. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, who gave it to you, or a short memory). Use linking words if you add more than one detail and avoid repeating the examiner’s words. Keep your answer to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon, which helped me become more confident and independent.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion and follow with specific reasons and examples. Use proper grammar (e.g. “bikes are” not “bite aren't”), and link your ideas with connectors like “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Limit to at most three short sentences and provide a concrete example or comparison to support your view.

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for long distances. For example, public streets lack separate bike lanes, so cycling is less safe and less common than driving.

× Yes, I have a bike. When you were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner's question asked about the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so the student should use past simple tense. 'Have' is present tense and 'you' is incorrect in the clause; it should match the subject 'I' and past time reference: 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Use past simple for completed actions/events in the past.

× Umm no bite aren't popular in my country because, umm, my country. Have umm.

✓ Umm, no, bikes aren't popular in my country because there aren't many people who cycle.

The original sentence has multiple problems: 'bite' is a mispronunciation/typo for 'bikes,' word order and missing words make the sentence ungrammatical, and the fragment 'my country. Have umm.' is incomplete. Corrected version uses subject 'bikes' and correct verb contraction 'aren't' with a clear reason clause. Also adds 'there aren't many people who cycle' to complete the idea. To improve, speak clearly, choose complete clauses, and ensure subject and verb are present and in correct order.