Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, tense consistency and conciseness. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating affirmative words and keep to no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived near a park, I practiced there until I could ride without help.

Sugestão: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), make the opinion clear, then support it with specific reasons or examples linked by connectors. Use concise language and one or two supporting points to make the answer natural and effective.

Exemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in the Philippines. Although some people use them for short trips, most people prefer motorcycles or cars because public roads are busy and often unsafe for cyclists.

× Yeah, yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time. Suggestion: use consistent tense with time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child I had...'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× I don't think that bikes is popular in my country which is the Philippines.

✓ I don't think that bikes are popular in my country, which is the Philippines.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' rather than 'is'. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is the Philippines' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure the verb agrees in number with the subject and punctuate nonrestrictive clauses properly. Grammar problem type ID:27