Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct grammar and keep it natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct the grammatical errors (e.g. 'interested' not 'interesting'), and avoid irrelevant wording like 'writing' which seems wrong here. If you want to explain why, add one short supporting detail using a linking phrase (e.g. 'because' or 'so'). Keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wasn't very interested in cycling, so my parents never bought one for me. Instead, I usually walked or used public transport to get around.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and number agreement. Use linking words to connect ideas and add one specific example or reason to support your statement. Replace vague phrases ('other workplaces they want to go') with precise language. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students ride bikes to universities because it's cheap and faster in traffic, and many office workers use them for short commutes to save money and avoid congestion.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was not really interesting in writing.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was not really interested in riding.

The adjective 'interesting' (which describes something that causes interest) is incorrectly used to describe the speaker's state. The correct adjective is 'interested' (which describes a person who feels interest). Additionally, 'writing' is incorrect in context; the intended word is 'riding' (riding a bike). Suggestion: use 'interested in' plus the correct gerund 'riding'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Absolutely. Bikes are very popular in our country. Many teenagers use it for going universities, colleges and also many adults use it for going offices and other workplaces they want to go.

✓ Absolutely. Bikes are very popular in our country. Many teenagers use them to go to universities and colleges, and many adults also use them to get to offices and other workplaces.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to the plural noun 'bikes', so it should be 'them' (plural) — this is a subject-verb/pronoun agreement issue. Also, the expression 'for going universities' is ungrammatical: use the infinitive with 'to' ('to go to universities and colleges'). 'Use it for going offices' should be 'use them to get to offices' or 'to go to offices'. Suggestions: match pronoun number to its antecedent ('bikes' -> 'them') and use 'to go to' or 'to get to' for destinations. Grammar problem type ID: 27