Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it's very short and lacks any supporting detail. To improve, add one or two brief reasons or a short comment about how that affected you (for example, whether you wanted one or used other transport). Use one linking word if you add more than one sentence, and keep the total to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked or took public transport to school because my family lived far from the nearest bike shop. As a result, I didn't learn to ride until I was a teenager.

Sugestão: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammatical errors, redundancy, and unclear phrasing. To improve: start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Use correct linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because', 'while') and avoid repeating phrases. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are popular in rural provinces because people often travel short distances and roads are less crowded. However, in big cities fewer people buy bikes because there is limited space for cycling and traffic is heavy, so many prefer cars or public transport.

× And the provinces bikes are very popular, but in the city, since there are no Rd. spaces for bikes, lesser people have lesser people tend to buy bikes.

✓ In the provinces, bikes are very popular, but in the city, since there are no road spaces for bikes, fewer people tend to buy them.

This sentence has multiple issues: word order and extra words ('And the provinces bikes' should be 'In the provinces, bikes'), vocabulary ('Rd.' should be written as 'road'), and redundancy/incorrect quantifier ('lesser people have lesser people tend to buy bikes' is ungrammatical). Use the quantifier 'fewer' for countable nouns (people) and avoid repeating phrases. Also replace the repeated noun with a pronoun ('them') to avoid repetition. The corrected sentence maintains tense and contrast between provinces and city.