Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct grammar (use past tense 'was' and 'ride' not 'write'), reduce hesitation words (umm, uh), and organize into a clear short narrative: direct topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and a concluding remark. Use linking words (but, so, because) correctly. Keep it within 3–4 sentences for natural flow.

Exemplo: When I was a child I didn't have a bike at first because I couldn't ride one. Later a friend taught me how to ride, and I practised with them every weekend. When I told my parents, they encouraged me to spend more time practising, so I kept improving.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words (umm, like). Use more accurate vocabulary (not really popular, some people use bikes for commuting). Use linking words (however, because, for example) to connect ideas and make the answer concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. However, some people do use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient in crowded cities.

× Umm, in my country I think that like it's not really popular but umm some of people used to ride a bike to as a transportation, yes.

✓ Umm, in my country I think that it's not really popular, but some people used to ride bikes as transportation.

Original sentence has plural/singular and count noun errors: 'some of people' is incorrect; correct is 'some people'. 'a bike' after 'some people' suggests each person one bike — better 'ride bikes' for habitual action. Also 'to as a transportation' is ungrammatical (preposition and article misuse). Suggestion: use 'ride bikes as transportation' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Umm, when I were a child, I didn't have a bike because I didn't know how to ride.

✓ Umm, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I didn't know how to ride.

Using 'were' with the singular first-person subject 'I' is incorrect in simple past. The correct past form is 'was'. Suggestion: use 'I was a child' for past state. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× But umm, my friend taught me how to ride.

✓ But, my friend taught me how to ride a bike.

The original sentence is mostly correct grammatically, but adding the object 'a bike' clarifies the action. No -ing form error applies; however, keeping infinitive 'to ride' after 'how' is correct. This suggestion improves clarity rather than correcting a grammatical error. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× So when I told my parents about that, they told me that, uh, you have to spend more time to learn it, how to write.

✓ So when I told my parents about that, they told me, 'You have to spend more time learning it,' or 'You have to spend more time to learn how to ride.'

Original mixes direct speech and incorrect verb forms: 'to learn it, how to write' is confused and 'how to write' is a wrong verb (write vs ride). Use either 'spend more time learning it' (gerund after 'spend time') or 'spend more time to learn how to ride' (infinitive with purpose). Also replace 'how to write' with 'how to ride.' Suggestion: choose one clear structure and correct the verb. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× So when I told my parents about that, they told me that, uh, you have to spend more time to learn it, how to write.

✓ So when I told my parents about that, they told me that I had to spend more time learning how to ride.

The reported speech should shift pronouns and tense: original uses direct second-person 'you' when reporting what parents said to the speaker. In indirect speech, change 'you have to' to 'I had to' and adjust tense to past. Also correct 'how to write' to 'how to ride.' Suggestion: use proper tense and pronoun shifts in reported speech. Grammar problem type ID: 12