Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”), then add one or two specific reasons using linking words (because / so / although). Avoid repetition and incorrect tense forms (use past simple: didn’t have; allowed). Keep it under 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn’t allow me to ride at a very young age. Instead, I only used a small push-bike around our garden, so I didn’t learn to cycle on the road until I was older.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore). Avoid filler words and correct collocations (popular, country, people prefer bikes to cars). Keep answers concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper and easier to park than cars. For example, many commuters use motorcycles or scooters to travel short distances, especially in crowded cities, because they save time and fuel.

× No, I wasn't having I, no, I wasn't having a bike when I was child because my parents didn't allow me to ride a bike in a in a very in a such a small age.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't allow me to ride one at such a young age.

The student used the past continuous 'wasn't having' incorrectly; possession is expressed with the simple past 'didn't have'. Also 'when I was child' lacks the article 'a'. 'Such a small age' is unnatural; 'such a young age' or 'at a young age' is correct. Suggestions: use simple past for past possession, include articles where needed, and prefer 'young' with 'age'.

× So I was only having a bicycle to ride in my childhood.

✓ So I only had a bicycle to ride in my childhood.

Again 'was having' is incorrect for possession; use simple past 'had'. 'I was only having a bicycle' is awkward. Also 'in my childhood' is acceptable but 'during my childhood' or 'when I was a child' can be more natural. Suggestions: use 'had' for past possession and consider 'during my childhood'.

× Yes, I you generally think the bikes are very famous in our company uh, as a bikes, as in our country, many of the people ride bikes uh, as they prefer bikes over the car, which are very convenient and easy to ride.

✓ Yes, I generally think bikes are very popular in our country. Many people ride bikes because they prefer them to cars; bikes are convenient and easy to ride.

Multiple errors: 'I you generally think' has extra words and wrong pronoun. 'Very famous' is wrong collocation for objects; use 'popular'. 'In our company' is incorrect context; likely 'in our country'. 'Many of the people' is overly wordy; use 'many people'. 'Prefer bikes over the car' mixes singular and plural; use 'prefer them to cars' or 'prefer bikes to cars'. 'Which are very convenient' incorrectly uses 'which' and plural agreement; clearer to state 'bikes are convenient'. Suggestions: remove extraneous words, use 'popular', ensure noun-pronoun number agreement, use 'prefer X to Y', and keep sentence splits for clarity.