Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid fillers like "uh" and repetition. For example, say when you had the bike, how often you rode it, and a brief reason or memory to make the answer specific and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike from the age of seven and rode it almost every day after school. For example, I used to cycle to my friend’s house and practice tricks in the park, which really improved my confidence.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary and clearer linking words. Start with a topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., "senior motorbike") with correct terms (e.g., "motorbikes" or "scooters") and avoid unnecessary hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use motorbikes and scooters for daily commuting. For instance, office workers and students often ride scooters to avoid traffic and save time, especially in busy cities.

× Uh, yes, I did. I do, I did have a bike, uh, when I, when I were trying and then I practice, uh, who use bicycle every day.

✓ Uh, yes, I did. I had a bike when I was learning, and I practiced using the bicycle every day.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'I do, I did have' is redundant and incorrect for past reference — use simple past 'I had'. 'when I were trying' uses wrong verb and tense; for first person singular use 'I was' and a clearer verb such as 'learning'. 'I practice' should be past 'I practiced' to match past timeframe. 'who use bicycle' is incorrect relative clause and missing article — use 'using the bicycle'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood events and use subject-appropriate verb forms and articles.

× Uh, yes, I do think so because in my country a lot of people use senior motorbike, uh, to travel from homes, uh, to their office and vice versa.

✓ Yes, I think so because in my country a lot of people use small motorbikes to travel from home to the office and back.

Several issues: 'I do think so' is acceptable but simpler 'I think so' fits conversational tone. 'senior motorbike' is incorrect word choice — likely 'small motorbikes' or 'scooters'. 'from homes' should be singular 'from home' and 'vice versa' is awkward; use 'back' or 'to return'. Quantifier 'a lot of people' is fine. Suggestion: use correct noun ('motorbikes' or 'scooters'), singular 'home', and clear phrase 'to the office and back'.

× And then so do the student also.

✓ And students do too.

Pronoun and noun number agreement: 'the student' is singular but context refers to students in general. 'so do the student also' is ungrammatical word order. Use plural 'students' and place 'too' or 'also' at end: 'students do too'. Suggestion: match number and use natural word order for emphasis.