Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), provide a clear topic sentence, add a specific brief detail and use a linking word. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, say you didn’t own one but often borrowed your cousin’s bike, mention how often or what you enjoyed doing, and connect ideas with a linking word like “however” or “so.”

Exemplo: I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but my cousin did, so he often let me borrow his. For example, I would ride it to the park every weekend to play with friends, which I really enjoyed.

Sugestão: Make the statement more natural and specific: use plural form (“bikes”), explain why they are popular, and add a linking word to expand briefly. Give a concrete reason or example (e.g., affordability, traffic, exercise). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially when I was a child, because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people use them to commute to school or local markets, so they remain a common sight in neighborhoods.

× To be honest I don't have a bike but I have a cousin who has one and he let me borrow sometime.

✓ To be honest I didn't have a bike, but I had a cousin who had one and he let me borrow it sometimes.

Tense consistency and missing object: The question asked about childhood (past), so present tense 'don't have' and 'have' are incorrect; they should be past tense (didn't have, had). Also 'let me borrow sometime' is ungrammatical: use 'let me borrow it sometimes' or 'let me borrow it sometimes' to include the object 'it' (the bike) and plural adverb 'sometimes'. Use past tense 'let' is acceptable because it is past; keep it. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past when referring to childhood and include the object 'it' and adverb 'sometimes'.

× Yes, bike is very popular in my country, especially during my childhood days.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially during my childhood.

Number and article: 'bike' as a general noun should be plural 'bikes' or preceded by 'the'. Also 'is' should agree with plural 'bikes' so use 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Childhood days' is redundant; use 'my childhood' or 'my childhood years'. Suggestion: say 'bikes are very popular' and prefer 'my childhood' for natural phrasing.