Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes I did. I had a a bike. I was when I was child. I usually ride bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes I do and bike are P popular in Japan in my in my case my high school student. Often ride a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答は簡潔ですが文法と語順の誤りが多く、内容も具体性に欠けます。まず、現在と過去を混同しないこと(過去の習慣は過去形を使う)と、冠詞や複数形に注意してください。また、話を豊かにするために短い理由や頻度を付け加えると良いです。つなぎ言葉(e.g. "when I was a child", "usually", "because")を適切に使って文の流れを作りましょう。発話は最大5文に収め、主語・動詞の一致を確認してください。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to my friend’s house on weekends because it was faster than walking. I remember practicing riding until I felt confident, and my parents often helped me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 44.0Sugestão: 答えは肯定していますが、文法、語順、不要な繰り返しが目立ちます。主語と動詞の一致や形容詞・副詞("popular" の使い方)に注意してください。意見を述べたら、必ず具体的な例や理由を1~2つ追加しましょう(例:学生が通学に使う、交通や駐輪場の事情など)。接続詞(e.g. "because", "for example", "so")を使い、論理的な流れを作る練習をしてください。
Exemplo: Yes, I do. Bicycles are very popular in Japan, especially among high school students. For example, many students ride bikes to school because it is convenient and inexpensive. As a result, there are often many bike parking areas near schools.
× I had a a bike.
✓ I had a bike.
重複した冠詞 'a a' と名詞の数は単数で正しいため、余分な 'a' を削除してください。英語では冠詞は一つだけ使用します。 Suggestion: Remove the extra 'a' so the sentence reads 'I had a bike.'.
× I was when I was child.
✓ I was a child.
'I was when I was child' は語順と冠詞が不正です。状態を表すときは 'I was a child' のように主語+動詞+冠詞+名詞の順にします。 Suggestion: Use 'I was a child.' to state past age or condition.
× I usually ride bike.
✓ I usually ride a bike.
可算名詞 'bike' を使う場合、単数には冠詞 'a' が必要です。現在習慣を表す現在形 'usually ride' は正しいです。 Suggestion: Add the indefinite article: 'I usually ride a bike.'.
× Yes I do and bike are P popular in Japan in my in my case my high school student.
✓ Yes, I do. Bikes are popular in Japan; in my case, during high school, I was a student who often rode a bike.
複数の誤りがあります。'bike are' は数の不一致なので複数形 'bikes are' にするか単数で 'a bike is' にします。文がつながりすぎて不明瞭なので句読点で分け、冠詞と時制を正しくします。 Suggestion: Use 'Bikes are popular in Japan.' Then specify personal context clearly: 'In my case, during high school, I often rode a bike.'.
× Often ride a bike.
✓ I often rode a bike.
主語が抜けており、時制も文脈(過去)に合わせて過去形にする必要があります。命令や省略以外では主語を明示してください。 Suggestion: Say 'I often rode a bike.' to indicate a habitual action in the past.