Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief reason or detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating 'never' twice and try to vary vocabulary (e.g., 'owned' / 'ridden').

Exemplo: No, I never owned a bike as a child. However, I did watch other kids ride in the neighborhood, so I always felt curious but never had the chance to learn.

Sugestão: Make the answer more structured: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting points with linking words. Remove filler words and repetitions, and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'practical', 'commute').

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them to commute since they are practical and inexpensive, especially for short trips to school or work.

× No, I've never had a bike and I've never tried it before.

✓ No, I never had a bike and I never rode one.

The student mixed present perfect ('I've never had') with 'when you were a child' (a past time) — use simple past 'I never had'. Also 'tried it' is unclear: 'try a bike' is not natural for riding; use the past simple 'I never rode one.' Suggestion: match tense to the past time reference and use the correct verb for the action.

× Yeah, I do think bikes are popular in my country because it is very efficient to use and easy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are very efficient and easy to use.

Use 'Yes' instead of 'Yeah' for formal responses. 'Bikes' is plural, so pronoun and verbs should be plural ('they are'). Adjective order: 'easy to use' is the correct phrase, not 'easy' alone after 'and'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement and natural adjective + infinitive ordering.

× Like if you have if you don't have a car or a motorcycle, you can use a bike because it's convenient if you need to go to school or work.

✓ If you do not have a car or a motorcycle, you can use a bike because it is convenient when you need to go to school or work.

Remove repeated 'if' and use 'do not' for clarity/formality. Use 'when' instead of the second 'if' to indicate typical occasions. Expand contractions for formality ('it's' -> 'it is') if needed. Suggestion: avoid repetition, ensure logical connectors, and maintain consistent formality.