Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer repeats the examiner's question instead of responding. For Part 1 you should directly answer with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and under five sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, when you got it, and one short reason or memory to enrich the response.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I received my first bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it to visit my grandparents every weekend. Because the streets near our house were quiet, I felt safe practicing and quickly became confident.

Sugestão: Your answer gives a direct opinion but has grammar errors, a vague pronoun (“he”) and lacks specific supporting details. Improve by correcting grammar, using linking words (for example, because/so/therefore), and adding one concrete example or reason. Keep it concise and natural (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they play an important role in everyday life. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities, so they save time and money.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because he play an important role in daily activities of life.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because they play an important role in daily life.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect for referring to 'bikes' (a plural inanimate noun); use 'they' (plural pronoun) — this is a pronoun use error and causes subject-verb mismatch. Also the verb 'play' must agree with the plural subject 'they' (correct here). 'Activities of life' is awkward; use 'daily life' for natural English. Suggestion: match pronouns to their antecedents' number and animacy and prefer set phrases like 'daily life'.