Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: The student did not answer the question. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how often you rode, a memory). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words like “when” or “because” if you add extra information.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and rode it to school most days. Because the roads near my house were quiet, I learned to ride confidently and even joined friends for weekend rides.

Sugestão: The answer is unclear and off-topic. Start with a clear opinion about popularity (Yes/No/It depends), then give specific reasons and a short example. Use linking words (for example, because, however, especially) and precise vocabulary (popular, common, commuting, recreation). Keep within 1–4 supporting sentences and avoid irrelevant comparisons or numbers without explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities for short trips and commuting. For example, many people use bicycles to avoid traffic and save money, and you can see them commonly near markets and schools. However, in rural areas motorbikes and cars are more common because distances are longer.

× Hello, how are you?

✓ (No correction needed)

This greeting is grammatically correct and appropriate for the context; there is no pronoun error. No change required.

× I will guess what is it like sending in Pakistan and England.

✓ I will guess what it is like living in Pakistan and England.

The original has incorrect word order for an embedded question and uses the wrong gerund 'sending' instead of 'living'. Embedded questions follow statement word order, so 'what it is like' is correct, not 'what is it like'. Replace 'sending' with 'living' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'I will guess what it is like living in...' or simply 'I will guess what living in... is like.'

× It mostly likes to like 71 or and and I will be wonderful bikes ride in Pakistan and India.

✓ It is mostly liked by people there; for example, about 70% of people ride bikes in Pakistan and India, and I think bike riding would be wonderful.

The original sentence has several problems: 'likes to like 71 or and and' is nonsensical and misuses quantifiers; 'likes' is the wrong verb form and collocation for the intended passive idea; missing subjects and connectors create a fragmented sentence. A clear way to express the idea is to use a statistic phrase 'about 70%' and passive construction 'is mostly liked' or active 'people there like them.' Also separate clauses with proper conjunctions and punctuation. Suggestion: decide whether you mean a statistic (use a number and '%' or 'about') or a general statement (use 'people there often ride bikes').