Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and correct noun/verb agreement (e.g., 'public transport was allowed').

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents thought cycling was dangerous because there were many traffic accidents in our area, so they preferred I use public transport instead. As a result, I usually took the bus to school.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Mention the app's impact with correct vocabulary and grammar, use linking words (for example, because, therefore), and avoid repetition and fillers.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, since the Pathow app launched, many people rent bikes through the app because it is convenient and affordable. Consequently, bike-sharing services have grown quickly and are now a common way to travel short distances.

× When I was a kid, I was not allowed to have a bike because, uh, it's uh, often have accidents.

✓ When I was a kid, I was not allowed to have a bike because there were often accidents.

The original mixes present ('it's') with past context. The speaker refers to past frequency, so 'there were often accidents' is correct past-tense form. Also use 'there were' to introduce the existence of accidents. Suggestion: keep verbs in past when describing past situations (e.g., 'there were often accidents').

× So my parents didn't allow me to have a bike.

✓ So my parents didn't allow me to have a bike.

This sentence is already correct past tense and matches context. No grammatical change needed. Explanation: 'didn't allow' correctly uses past simple negative to describe a past action.

× Instead of that public transport are are permitted for beyond the.

✓ Instead, public transport was permitted for going farther.

Original sentence has word order problems, duplicated word 'are', incorrect tense and unclear phrase 'for beyond the.' Corrected version uses 'Instead' to contrast, 'public transport was permitted' to match past context, and 'for going farther' to express intended meaning. Suggestion: avoid duplicated words and place verbs after the subject; ensure spatial phrases ('farther', 'to travel farther') are clear.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country uh, after introducing Pathow app uh, mostly uh, the biker are my for biker.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. After the introduction of the Pathow app, many bikers use it for their work.

Original mixes awkward phrasing and wrong verb forms: 'the biker are my for biker' is ungrammatical. Use present simple 'are' for general fact, and 'many bikers use it for their work' to state habitual action. Also 'after introducing' should be 'after the introduction of' or 'after Pathow was introduced.' Suggestion: simplify and use clear subject-verb-object order: 'many bikers use it for their work.'

× It's a very it's a very common for them that, uh use this app and uh provides bike service to others, which is that's why it's a very popular in my.

✓ It is very common for them to use this app and provide bike services to others, which is why it is very popular in my country.

Original has repetition 'it's a very it's a very', incorrect verb forms 'use' and 'provides' mismatched with subjects, and incomplete ending 'in my.' Use infinitive 'to use' after 'common for them,' and plural noun 'services' with base verb 'provide' to match plural subject 'them.' 'Which is why it is very popular in my country' completes the thought. Suggestion: avoid repeating fragments, ensure verbs agree with their subjects, and finish location phrases (e.g., 'in my country').