Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, avoid repetition and filler sounds, and give one or two specific details. Limit to up to five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had two bikes when I was a child: a pink one for short rides and a blue one for longer trips. I used to ride them to visit friends and to play in the park, so they were an important part of my childhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear opinion and use correct tense and linking words. Avoid repeated fillers and vague phrases. Provide a reason and a brief comparison or example to support your view.

Exemplo: They used to be more popular, but not as much now. Although many people rode bikes in the past, the availability of the metro and buses has reduced cycling today, especially in big cities.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a children when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time 'when I was a child' and uses the incorrect plural noun 'children' after 'a'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference, and use the singular noun 'child' after 'a'. Suggestion: use consistent tense for time references and ensure noun number matches the article (a + singular).

× I have two bikes.

✓ I had two bikes.

The context is past (the examiner asked about childhood), so the verb should be past tense. Change present 'have' to past 'had' to match 'when you were a child'.

× Uh, one is pink and one is blue.

✓ One was pink and one was blue.

Because the student is talking about past possessions, present tense 'is' should be changed to past tense 'was' to maintain consistent time reference. Keep sentence structure but match tense to past context.

× The bike was popularity in my country uh, in the past but umm, currently the bike uh, isn't, isn't popularity same as the path because umm, we have umm other transportation like metro.

✓ Bikes were popular in my country in the past, but currently they are not as popular because we have other transportation like the metro.

Multiple issues: 'was popularity' is incorrect word order and form; use adjective 'popular' not noun 'popularity'. Subject-verb agreement: 'bike' singular vs general meaning 'bikes' plural; use plural 'bikes' and plural verb 'were' for past general statement. 'isn't ... popularity same as the path' is ungrammatical—replace with 'are not as popular'. Add article 'the' before 'metro'. Suggestion: use correct adjective form, match singular/plural for general statements, and use comparative structure 'not as popular'.