Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, tense and add brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one short supporting detail using a linking phrase. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I remember sometimes borrowing my neighbour’s bike to ride to the park on weekends.

Sugestão: Correct grammar, use clearer structure and specific reasons with linking words. Begin with a direct statement, then give one or two concise, specific reasons using linking words like because or for example. Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars. For example, students and low-income workers often use bicycles for short commutes and to save money on transport.

× No, I don't have bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student must use past tense. Also the noun 'bike' requires an article 'a' when singular. Use 'didn't have' (past) and 'a bike'. Suggestion: Match the tense to the time reference and include appropriate articles: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× Yeah, bike is very popular in my country because everyone have bike, everyone not afford car, so everyone have some people have bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because not everyone can afford a car, so many people have bikes.

Multiple issues: use plural 'bikes' to talk generally, so use plural noun and plural verb agreement ('bikes are'). 'Everyone have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'everyone' takes singular verbs but here meaning 'not everyone' requires rephrasing; use 'not everyone can afford a car' (modal 'can' for ability) and 'many people have bikes' for clarity. Also include articles: 'a car'. Suggestions: Use plural for general statements ('bikes are'), correct subject-verb forms or rephrase with 'many people' for plural verb, and use modal 'can' to express ability: 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because not everyone can afford a car, so many people have bikes.'