Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the reply more natural, concise, and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., 'When I was a child', 'we used to ride with him').

Exemplo: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I often rode on my father’s. For example, he would take me and my sibling on short trips around the neighborhood, and I loved feeling the wind on my face as we rode together.

Sugestão: Provide a direct topic sentence, then support with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Use correct word forms and avoid vague endings. Mention who finds bikes popular and why, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many children and teenagers prefer them because they are cheap and convenient for short trips; for instance, young people often ride bikes to school or to meet friends and enjoy the feeling of the wind and freedom while cycling.

× When I was child I had no bike, but my father had a bike and we used to ride a bike riding with him.

✓ When I was a child I had no bike, but my father had one and we used to ride it with him.

Missing article before 'child' (should be 'a child') and repetition/wordiness with 'bike' and 'ride a bike riding' causes awkward structure. Also use 'one' to avoid repeating 'bike' and 'ride it with him' for clarity. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and avoid redundant words.

× He always took us with him in the bike, riding wherever we want to go, he always took us.

✓ He always took us with him on the bike, riding wherever we wanted to go.

Preposition for being on a bicycle is 'on', not 'in'. Tense inconsistency: the context is past, so 'want' should be 'wanted'. Also sentence was repetitive; combine clauses for fluency. Suggestion: use 'on the bike' and keep past tense for past habitual actions.

× I think in my country bikes are very popular.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country.

Meaning is correct but word order is more natural as 'bikes are very popular in my country'. Keep present simple as opinion; no tense change needed. Suggestion: place time/place expression at end for natural English.

× The younger boys are always fond of to have a bike and they always want to ride the bike whenever they go to the outside and they enjoy the bike riding the feeling of the wind and they also.

✓ Younger boys are always fond of having a bike, and they always want to ride it when they go outside because they enjoy the feeling of the wind.

Several issues: 'fond of to have' is incorrect — after 'fond of' use gerund 'having'; 'the younger boys' better as 'younger boys' unless specific; 'go to the outside' should be 'go outside'; 'ride the bike' -> 'ride it' to avoid repetition; sentence fragment 'and they also' incomplete. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'fond of', avoid unnecessary articles, use 'outside' not 'to the outside', and finish thoughts to avoid fragments.