Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and word choice, and make your answer more concise and natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense/verb forms (e.g., "enjoyed" → "enjoyed" only for past narrative but use "used to enjoy" or "would" for habitual past). Avoid repetition ("riding a bicycle" repeated) and fix prepositions ("go our nearby streets" → "go to nearby streets").

Exemplo: Yes. My dad bought me a bicycle when I was ten, and I used to ride it every afternoon with my sister and childhood friends around the village. We often rode to nearby streets to explore, and it was a fun way to get fresh air and exercise.

Sugestão: Clarify vocabulary and fix word choice and grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes or No + reason), then give a specific supporting detail and an example. Use correct nouns ("bikes" not "bags"), plural agreement, and smoother linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences and avoid awkward phrases like "some of people".

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. Many students and workers use bicycles to avoid public transport costs; for example, university students often cycle to campus to save money and time.

× My sister and I, together with our childhood friends, are enjoyed riding a bicycle every afternoon around our village.

✓ My sister and I, together with our childhood friends, enjoyed riding bicycles every afternoon around our village.

The sentence uses 'are enjoyed' which is incorrect for past habitual action. Use simple past 'enjoyed' to match 'when I was 10 years old' context. Also 'a bicycle' is awkward for multiple riders; use plural 'bicycles' or omit the article. Suggestion: use simple past for past routines and match noun number to subjects.

× We also go our nearby streets.

✓ We also went to the nearby streets.

The original lacks the correct verb and preposition. 'Go' should be in the past 'went' to match the time frame, and 'to' is required before the destination. Also include the article 'the' before 'nearby streets.' Use 'went to the nearby streets.'

× Yes, bags are popular in our country, most especially those who have a tight budget to pay for the public transport fee to go to their schools or works every day, and some of people are riding a bicycle.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, especially among those who have a tight budget to pay public transport fees to go to school or work every day, and some people ride bicycles.

Multiple issues here: 'bags' is a typo for 'bikes.' 'Most especially those who' should be 'especially among those' to correctly link the group. 'Public transport fee' should be plural 'fees' or 'the public transport fee' depending on meaning; here 'fees' fits. 'To go to their schools or works' is incorrect: say 'to go to school or work.' 'Some of people are riding a bicycle' has pronoun and verb form errors; correct to 'some people ride bicycles.' Overall adjust for noun choice, prepositions, pronouns, and verb tense/number to make a natural sentence.