Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and accurate in the topic sentence, avoid mistakes (e.g., 'bag' → 'bike') and tighten the answer to 2–4 coherent sentences. Use linking words (for example, 'so' or 'and') and include a specific detail or brief reason to make the memory vivid. Keep grammar correct (e.g., 'experience' → 'experiences' or 'one of the most memorable experiences I had').

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around the backyard of our house, and I remember learning to balance without training wheels. Because I spent hours practicing, that summer became one of my most memorable childhood experiences.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are very popular'), then give 1–2 concise, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'therefore'). Avoid fillers ('umm') and incorrect verb forms ('does who cannot' → 'people who cannot').

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many commuters use bicycles to avoid traffic and save on public transport costs.

× Yes, I had a bag when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The student said 'bag' but context and question ask about a bike; this is a content error rather than grammar, but keeping grammar rules, the past simple 'had' is correct. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bike' to match the question.

× I used to ride my bike and go around the backyard of my house and that's one of the most memorable experience that I've got when I was a child.

✓ I used to ride my bike and go around the backyard of my house, and that's one of the most memorable experiences I had when I was a child.

Multiple issues: 'one of the most memorable experience' is singular but should be plural 'experiences' (Grammar problem type ID 1 Singular and plural issue). Also 'I've got when I was a child' mixes present perfect with a specific past time; use past simple 'I had' for a completed past action (Grammar problem type ID 5 Past tense issue). Suggestions: make the noun plural 'experiences' and change 'I've got' to 'I had' to match the past time reference.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country since that is still being used until now as mode of transportation around the city and most of the people who does who cannot afford to take the public transportation UMM opted to use a bike as the way to UMM.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because they are still used as a mode of transportation around the city, and many people who cannot afford public transportation opt to use a bike.

Several grammar problems: 'since that is still being used until now' is awkward and incorrect: use 'because they are still used' (Grammar problem type ID 6 Present tense issue and ID 21 Incorrect passive voice simplified). 'as mode of transportation' needs an article: 'as a mode of transportation' (Grammar problem type ID 22 Article errors). 'most of the people who does who cannot afford' has subject-verb agreement error 'does' with plural 'people' — should be 'people who cannot afford' (Grammar problem type ID 27 Subject-verb agreement errors and ID 2 Third person singular issue). 'opted to use' mixes past 'opted' with present general fact; use present 'opt' (Grammar problem type ID 7 Future tense issue? actually present tense issue ID 6). Also remove filler 'UMM' and redundant phrases 'as the way to UMM'. Suggestions: simplify the sentence, use 'because' for reason, plural agreement 'they are', correct article 'a mode', and present tense 'opt' for general statements.