Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be consistent and clear in tense and word choice. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details. Avoid contradictory phrasing (e.g., saying you didn’t have a bike then claiming you have a cycle without clarifying timing). Use simple linking words like “but” or “however” when contrasting past and present.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I started riding a cycle when I was a teenager because it was an affordable way to travel to school.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and one brief example. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, “because,” “so,” “for example,” or “therefore”). Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “the country is small,” “travel long distances”) will improve clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it is small and traffic is often congested, so riding a bike is faster and cheaper. For example, many students and office workers cycle short distances to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× No, I didn't have a bike. I have a cycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike. I had a bicycle.

The examiner's question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the second clause should also use past tense for consistency. Use 'had' instead of 'have'. Also, 'bicycle' is a more natural noun than 'cycle' in this context. Suggestion: maintain past tense for all statements about past situations (e.g., 'I had a bicycle').

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because our country so small and that's why lots of people will buy bikes and get a long distance and travels also they can go home and.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in our country because it is small, so many people buy bikes to travel long distances and to get home easily.

This sentence has multiple structural and grammatical problems: missing verb 'is' after 'country' (Present tense issue), incorrect modal 'will' (Future tense issue) where simple present should be used for general facts, awkward phrase 'get a long distance and travels' and misplaced 'also' (Sentence structure errors and Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs). Corrections: add 'it is' to form 'because it is small' (present tense fact), replace 'that's why lots of people will buy' with 'so many people buy' (use simple present for habitual/general truths), change 'get a long distance and travels also they can go home and' to 'to travel long distances and to get home easily' for clear infinitive purposes and proper word order. Suggestion: break long ideas into clear clauses, use simple present for general facts, and use natural collocations like 'travel long distances' and 'get home'.