Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, of course. I have a bike in my childhood. It's designed especially for kids because it have two small wheels on its back wheel. It's suitable for beginners like me. Avoid falling down when I first ride the bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country. You can see a lot of shared bike on the street and people just scan the code and write it. So it is very convenient for people and it's very popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 句子應更自然、語法要正確,並把信息組織成一個主句加上至多兩個支持句。注意時態(過去式)、單複數一致以及連接詞的使用。可以把細節更具體,例如說明何時開始騎、是否使用輔助輪、對當時感受的描述。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about six. It came with training wheels, which made me feel safe at first, and I practiced every day until I could ride without them.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答需更準確與連貫,避免重複表達。說明原因時使用連接詞(for example, because, such as)並提供具體細節或比較,例如提到共享單車帶來的便利或交通影響。注意詞語搭配(shared bikes / scan a code / unlock)和語法。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use shared bikes because you can just scan a QR code to unlock one, which is cheap and convenient for short trips.
× Yes, of course. I have a bike in my childhood.
✓ Yes, of course. I had a bike in my childhood.
原句使用現在時 (have) 與時間狀語“in my childhood”(過去時間)不一致,應使用過去時。建議使用過去式 had,或改為現在完成時加明確時間範圍(I have had a bike since I was a child)視語境而定。
× It's designed especially for kids because it have two small wheels on its back wheel.
✓ It's designed especially for kids because it has two small wheels on its back wheel.
主語為單數(it),動詞應用第三人稱單數形式 has。不應使用 have。建議記住主語為he/she/it時動詞要加 -s。
× It's designed especially for kids because it have two small wheels on its back wheel.
✓ It's designed especially for kids because it has two small wheels on its back.
原句中“two small wheels on its back wheel”結構重複且不通順,應刪去多餘的“wheel”以表達“在後輪(後方)有兩個小輪子”。重組後語義更清晰。
× It's suitable for beginners like me. Avoid falling down when I first ride the bike.
✓ It's suitable for beginners like me. I avoided falling down when I first rode the bike.
第二句為獨立句但缺少主語和正確的時態。原句“Avoid falling down when I first ride the bike.” 既像祈使句又與前句時態不符。根據描述的過去經驗,應使用過去時並加主語:I avoided ... 或 I didn't fall ...;若想表達“為了避免摔倒”應用不定式或動名詞結構(to avoid / avoiding)。
× You can see a lot of shared bike on the street and people just scan the code and write it.
✓ You can see a lot of shared bikes on the street and people just scan the code and ride them.
“a lot of”後面若接可數名詞應使用複數形式 bikes,而原句使用單數 bike 錯誤。另外“write it”語義不合,應為“ride them”(騎車)。建議注意可數名詞單複數搭配及動詞選擇。
× You can see a lot of shared bike on the street and people just scan the code and write it.
✓ You can see a lot of shared bikes on the street and people just scan the code and ride them.
原句中的動詞串聯應保持平行結構:scan the code and ride them。原句“scan the code and write it”使用了錯誤的動詞 write 並且代詞 it 指代不明。建議保持動詞平行並確保代詞與先行詞數一致。
× So it is very convenient for people and it's very popular.
✓ So it is very convenient for people and very popular.
句子本身時態無誤,但連接後半部分重複使用主語+動詞“it's very popular”在口語可以,但書面上可簡化為“and very popular”。若保留完整句子亦可,無需兩次表達相同意思。