Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and possessive forms, avoid repetition, and keep to 3–4 sentences. For example, say where you got the bike, describe it briefly, and explain why it mattered to you.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I bought it from my sister’s best friend’s father, who runs a bicycle company in my hometown. It was an American pink bike, which I had always dreamed of because it looked stylish and rode smoothly. I loved it because it felt special and reliable.

Sugestão: Make the answer more fluent and provide specific, current examples. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then add supporting evidence using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "also"). Correct pronunciation fillers and unclear words, and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, when I was in elementary school most of my friends rode bikes to school, and even now many adults cycle to work or use bikes for exercise. Additionally, cities have been adding bike lanes, which makes cycling more common.

× I had a bike when I was child, but which I bought it from my my sister's best friend's father.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I bought it from my sister's best friend's father.

Missing the article 'a' before 'child' (singular count noun) and incorrect use of 'which' and redundant 'it'. Replace 'which I bought it from' with 'I bought it from' to form a correct clause. Suggestion: use 'a child' and avoid unnecessary relative pronouns when a simple clause suffices.

× I had a bike when I was child, but which I bought it from my my sister's best friend's father.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I bought it from my sister's best friend's father.

Redundant 'it' after 'which' creates a pronoun misuse. Using 'which' here is unnecessary; use a simple independent clause 'I bought it from...' and remove the duplicate 'my'. Suggestion: proofread for repeated words and avoid redundant pronouns.

× He owns a bicycle company in my hometown.

✓ He owns a bicycle company in my hometown.

Sentence is correct for singular/plural. No change needed; included to indicate checked item.

× And then he had this American pink bike that I was I've been always dream about that was a perfect pair.

✓ And then he had this American pink bike that I had always dreamed about; it was the perfect one for me.

Mixed and incorrect tense forms ('I was I've been always dream about') should be past perfect/ past perfect continuous or simple past. Use 'had always dreamed' (past perfect) to show desire before that past moment, or simple past 'I always dreamed' if continuous. Also 'dream about' needs past participle 'dreamed' and 'perfect pair' is unnatural here; use 'perfect one for me.' Suggestion: choose consistent past tense and use correct past participle 'dreamed'.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? Student: I think bikes are pretty uh, popular in my country because when I was in elementary school a lot of my friends had one and then ice a lot people using it still.

✓ I think bikes are pretty popular in my country because when I was in elementary school a lot of my friends had one, and a lot of people still use them.

Multiple issues: 'ice a lot people using it still' is garbled. Use present simple 'people still use them' to state a general fact. 'A lot of my friends had one' is past and correct for that time, and 'bikes' plural requires 'them' as object. Suggestion: use 'a lot of people still use them' and maintain consistent tense for general truths (present simple).