Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear, concise and grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and run-on fragments. Also correct tense and word choice (e.g., “I didn’t have a bike” not “I don’t, I didn't”).

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but I often borrowed my cousin’s. For example, we used to ride together at night along quiet streets, which felt exciting and helped me learn balance and confidence.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give two clear reasons with linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “popular,” “children,” “delivery couriers”), avoid filler words and repetitions, and correct awkward phrases. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many children use them for play and short journeys; secondly, they are widely used by delivery couriers because bikes are faster and cheaper in busy city streets.

× Actually, I don't, I didn't have a bike, but I always used my cousin's bike.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike, but I always used my cousin's bike.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past tense 'didn't'. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense consistently. Remove 'don't'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past situations (didn't, used).

× It was so cool and I I love how to ride a bike in the night with them

✓ It was so cool and I loved riding a bike at night with them.

The original mixes past 'was' with present 'love' and incorrect infinitive 'how to ride'. Use past tense 'loved' to match 'was', and use the gerund 'riding' after verbs expressing liking in past. Use 'at night' instead of 'in the night'.

× and also we we also in the night when we got a bike we do.

✓ Also, when we got a bike at night, we would ride together.

The original is repetitive and lacks clear verb structure. 'We do' is vague. Reconstruct the sentence to show habitual past action: 'would ride together' or 'rode together'. Remove duplicated words and place time expression 'at night' correctly.

× Yes, it's so uh bubbler because uh, the children use it and also, uh W we have like a delivery delivery, uh application.

✓ Yes, it's very popular because children use bikes a lot, and we also have delivery applications.

'Bubbler' is incorrect; likely meant 'popular'. Avoid filler sounds 'uh'. Use 'very popular' and clearer phrasing 'delivery applications'. Remove repetition 'delivery delivery'.

× It's used the, the bike for all for all uh pick up the order and deliver deliver it.

✓ They use bikes to pick up orders and deliver them.

Original has incorrect passive/subject placement 'It's used the bike' and repeats words. Use active voice 'They use bikes' and correct pronoun 'them' for plural 'orders'. Also remove repetition.

× Uh, it's so cool in my car.

✓ Uh, it's so convenient for me.

'It's so cool in my car' is unclear and ungrammatical in context. Likely meant that bikes are convenient compared to a car. Use 'convenient for me' or 'useful for deliveries' to convey meaning.