Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Expand your answer to be natural and informative. Give a clear topic sentence and one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words if you add more information. Avoid single-word answers.

Exemplo: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every weekend. Because my neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing there.

Sugestão: Organize your response: start with a clear direct answer, then give specific reasons and use linking words (however, although, because, therefore). Avoid contradictions like “yes, no” without clarification and reduce fillers. Provide concrete examples or trends to support your view.

Exemplo: I think bikes are less popular now than before, although they are becoming more common again because of rising fuel costs. For example, many people prefer cars and motorbikes for comfort and status, but recently cities have started bike-sharing programs and more commuters choose bicycles to save money and avoid traffic.

× Yes, uh no.

✓ Yes.

The student responded inconsistently with 'Yes, uh no.' This is not a grammatical category from the provided list but is an inappropriate mixed response. The simplest correction is to give a single clear answer 'Yes.' Suggestion: choose one clear response to avoid confusion.

× People are using luxurious vehicles nowadays and the use of bicycle is all gone.

✓ People use luxurious vehicles nowadays, and the use of bicycles has almost disappeared.

Error: tense and number. 'People are using' (present continuous) is acceptable for current trends but 'the use of bicycle is all gone' has multiple mistakes: 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' (singular/plural issue) and 'is all gone' is informal and mismatches tense. Using present simple 'use' or present perfect 'has disappeared' fits the general trend and current state. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements about a category and use 'has disappeared' or 'has declined' to describe a change over time.

× So due to high diesel and petrol prices people are now promoting this though.

✓ So, due to high diesel and petrol prices, people are now promoting them again.

Errors: pronoun reference and punctuation. 'This' does not correctly refer to 'bicycles' (incorrect use of pronouns); causal phrase needs commas. Use 'them' to refer to 'bicycles' (plural). Also 'promoting them again' is clearer than 'promoting this though.' Suggestion: add commas after introductory phrases and use correct pronoun number to match the noun it refers to.