Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitations, repetition and irrelevant social commentary. Use correct tense and plural/singular forms. Link ideas with simple connectors (but, so, however).

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bicycle as a child. In my community, girls were discouraged from riding bikes, so my family didn’t buy one for me. Instead, I played with toy bikes and small model cars, which I enjoyed a lot.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce fillers. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) to organize your answer. Provide a short concluding sentence if helpful.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short-distance travel. For example, many families own at least one bike for commuting to markets or schools, and in my neighbourhood I see dozens of bikes parked outside shops every day.

× Well, when I was child, I do not have bike because I'm a girl and our society do not allow us schools to, to run a bike.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I did not have a bike because I'm a girl and our society did not allow us to ride a bike.

Errors: 'when I was child' missing article (a child) — article error (22) and common collocation. 'do not have' is present tense but context is past, so use past tense 'did not have' (5). 'bike' needs an article 'a bike' (22). 'do not allow' should be past 'did not allow' to match timeframe. 'allow us schools to, to run a bike' is incorrect structure and word choice: use 'allow us to ride a bike'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past context, include articles before singular countable nouns, and use correct verb 'ride' with 'to' after 'allow'.

× So that's why uh, but I have uh, bikes in umm, toys.

✓ So that's why, but I had bikes as toys.

The speaker refers to past possession, so use past tense 'had' (5). 'in toys' is incorrect preposition and structure — use 'as toys' to show role. Also redundant filler words removed. Suggestion: match verb tense to narrative and use correct preposition 'as' when describing what something was used as.

× I have lot of cars, buses, so that's it.

✓ I had a lot of toy cars and buses, so that's it.

In past context use 'had' (5). 'lot of' needs an article 'a lot of' (1). Clarify these were toys: 'toy cars and buses'. Countable nouns in plural are fine but need determiners. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'lot of' and specify nouns clearly.

× Oh yes, bikes are most popular vehicle in over country uh, because, uh, the people of our country is uh, not much reached about uh, to buy cars uh, for daily life.

✓ Oh yes, bikes are the most popular vehicles in our country because the people of our country are not wealthy enough to buy cars for daily life.

Errors: Missing definite article 'the' before 'most popular' and singular/plural mismatch: 'vehicle' should be plural 'vehicles' or use 'the most popular form of transport' (17,1). 'over country' should be 'our country' — pronoun error (12). 'the people ... is' should be 'are' subject-verb agreement (27). 'not much reached about to buy' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'not wealthy/reached' — use 'not wealthy enough to buy'. Suggestion: use correct articles, ensure noun plurality matches, use correct verb agreement, and choose proper adjectives like 'wealthy' or 'well-off'.

× So mostly people have uh bikes, uh in every in every home I I see bikes, so I think bikes has.

✓ So mostly people have bikes; in almost every home I see bikes, so I think bikes are common.

Errors: 'have uh bikes' is acceptable but remove fillers. 'in every in every home I I see' repetition and word order — use 'in almost every home I see bikes' (26). Final clause 'I think bikes has' has wrong verb form 'has' with plural subject 'bikes' — use 'are common' (2 and 27). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects and use natural expressions like 'are common' or 'are popular'.