Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more consistent in tense and word choice, answer directly then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid contradictions (bike vs motorbike) and unclear phrases ("I have given several members"). Keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends around the neighborhood, especially in the evenings after school. For example, we would race to the park and take turns fixing flat tires, which made those times memorable.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give clear, specific reasons with correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words ("promote motorbikes as compost"). Mention concrete examples (price, convenience, celebrity endorsements) to support your opinion and keep language natural.

Exemplo: Yes, motorcycles and scooters are very popular in my country. For example, they are affordable and easy to park in crowded cities, so many commuters choose them. In addition, popular actors often appear in advertisements for bike brands, which helps increase their appeal.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'had' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: Use past simple for states in the past (I had, I lived, I liked).

× When I was a child, I usually played with the motorbike along with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I usually played on a motorbike with my friends.

The preposition choice and noun article are incorrect for the intended meaning. 'Play on a motorbike' is more natural than 'played with the motorbike' when describing riding or being on it. Also use 'a motorbike' to refer to one typical bike. Suggestion: Use appropriate prepositions for activities ('play on', 'ride') and include articles where needed.

× Moreover, we generally do bicycling during our free time and I have given several members with that bicycle.

✓ Moreover, we generally rode bicycles during our free time and I lent that bicycle to several friends.

Mixed tense and incorrect verb choices: 'do bicycling' is unnatural; for past habitual use 'rode bicycles' or 'used to go cycling'. 'Have given several members with that bicycle' is incorrect structure and tense: use 'lent that bicycle to several friends' to indicate past action of allowing others to use it. Also 'members' is unclear; 'friends' is more natural. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habits ('we rode', 'I lent') and correct object/preposition for 'lend' ('lend something to someone').

× There are many brands which promotes motorbikes.

✓ There are many brands that promote motorbikes.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'brands' is plural, so the verb should be 'promote' not 'promotes'. Also use 'that' or 'which' with plural verb 'promote'. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with its subject in number (brands -> promote).

× Moreover, in my country many people are influenced by celebrities and celebrities in my country also promote motorbikes as compost and other vehicles.

✓ Moreover, in my country many people are influenced by celebrities, and celebrities also promote motorbikes, scooters and other vehicles.

Repetition and incorrect word 'compost' (likely intended 'scooters' or 'cars'); 'celebrities in my country also promote' is redundant. Replace with clearer parallel structure and correct vehicle terms. Use comma before 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: Avoid repetition, choose correct vocabulary ('scooters' or 'cars'), and join related ideas clearly.

× So I think in my country bikes are very popular.

✓ So I think bikes are very popular in my country.

Word order is slightly awkward but not strictly ungrammatical; moving 'in my country' to the end sounds more natural in English. Tense 'think' is present and appropriate for stating opinion. Suggestion: Place location phrases at the end for natural word order (bikes are popular in my country).