Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammatical errors, avoid irrelevant fragments, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, correct “write 1” to “ride one,” remove repeated fillers, and explain briefly why you didn't have a bike or how that affected you.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. As a result, I never learned how to ride one, so I couldn’t join my friends when they went cycling. Because my family couldn’t afford one at the time, I usually stayed home or walked to nearby places instead.

Sugestão: Make the response more direct and cohesive. Begin with a clear opinion, then use linking words to contrast past and present, and provide a specific reason or example for the change in popularity. Replace vague phrases like “kind of” with precise language.

Exemplo: I think bikes used to be very popular in my city as an affordable mode of transport, but they are less common now. For example, the growth of cars and public transit has made cycling less necessary, although I still see some people riding for exercise or short trips.

× No, I never had the bike when I was a child so I never really got the chance to learn how to write 1 so whenever my friends plan on riding one, I. I don't get to join them.

✓ No, I never had a bike when I was a child, so I never really got the chance to learn how to ride one, so whenever my friends planned to ride, I didn't get to join them.

Errors involve incorrect verb choice and verb forms. 'the bike' is unnatural here; use 'a bike' (article). 'learn how to write 1' is incorrect; likely meant 'learn how to ride one' (verb + -ing form 'riding' could be used but 'learn how to ride' is correct). Tense consistency: question asks about past, so verbs should be past: 'plan' -> 'planned', 'don't get to join' -> 'didn't get to join'. Suggestions: use appropriate article 'a', use correct verb 'ride', keep past tense throughout for past situations, and avoid stray characters like '1'.

× Back then in my city I think that bike is really popular as a mode of transportation, but right now I don't think it's kind of popular anymore, though I often see people riding one.

✓ Back then in my city I think that bikes were really popular as a mode of transportation, but right now I don't think they are as popular anymore, though I still often see people riding them.

Multiple issues: singular/plural and tense/agreement. 'that bike is really popular' should be plural 'bikes were really popular' because speaking generally about bikes in the past. Use past tense 'were' for 'back then'. 'right now I don't think it's kind of popular' uses 'it' singular and 'kind of' is informal and awkward; use 'they are as popular' referring to bikes and 'as popular' for clarity. 'riding one' can be pluralized to 'riding them' to match 'bikes'. Suggestions: match number (singular/plural) and pronouns, keep tense appropriate to time expressions (back then -> past), and use clearer phrasing ('as popular', 'still often').