Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장 구조와 문법을 정확히 고치고 응답을 더 자연스럽고 구체적으로 만드는 연습을 하세요. 우선 간단한 주제문으로 직접 답한 뒤, 연결어를 사용해 추가 정보를 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 시제(과거) 일관성을 유지하고, ‘give me’ 대신 ‘give me’나 ‘give to me’ 같은 표현을 피하며 ‘my father gave me a bike’처럼 자연스러운 어순을 사용하세요. 또한 ‘I wanted to practice riding a bicycle’처럼 동명사(또는 현재완료/과거) 구조와 목적어를 정확히 쓰고, 자신의 기술 수준을 설명할 때는 구체적인 세부사항(예: how long you practiced, where you rode, whether you used training wheels)을 포함하세요.

Exemplo: Yes. My father gave me a bike when I was seven. I practiced riding it every day in the park for a few months, and at first I used training wheels. Gradually I became more confident and could ride on small hills.

Sugestão: 의미 전달을 위해 단어 선택과 문장 완결성을 개선하세요. ‘spikes’와 ‘bike’가 혼용되어 혼란을 주므로 정확한 단어(예: 'bikes' 또는 특정 브랜드/종류)를 사용하세요. 주제문으로 간단히 의견을 말한 뒤, 연결어(because, so, however)를 이용해 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 또한 'all the people' 같은 과장 표현 대신 'many people'이나 'a lot of people'처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 젊은층의 선호 이유를 구체적인 예(환경 문제, 경제성, 편의성 등)로 뒷받침하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient. Recently, young people prefer electric bikes because they are faster and require less effort.

× I wanna practice bicycle, but my bicycle skill is.

✓ I wanted to practice riding a bicycle, but my bicycle skills are not good.

Student used 'practice bicycle' which is incorrect; after 'practice' a verb+ -ing is needed (practicing riding). Also 'wanna' is informal and tense should match past 'had' (use 'wanted'). 'Bicycle skill is' is ungrammatical; use plural 'skills' and add qualifier. Suggestion: use 'practice riding a bicycle' and 'my bicycle skills are not good.'

× Yes, spikes is very popular in my country too because all the people usually ride bike but nowadays younger people love spike because.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because people usually ride bicycles, and nowadays younger people especially like bikes.

Errors: 'spikes' likely intended 'bikes' and subject-verb number mismatch 'spikes is' should be plural noun with plural verb 'are'. 'All the people' is unnatural; use 'people'. 'Ride bike' needs plural or article: 'ride bicycles' or 'ride a bike'. 'Love spike' is incorrect form. Suggestion: use correct plural noun 'bikes', match verb 'are', and use natural expressions 'people usually ride bicycles' and 'younger people like bikes.'

× Yes, I had a bike my father gave for me when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike that my father gave me when I was seven years old.

Phrase 'gave for me' is incorrect in English; the verb 'give' takes an indirect object: 'gave me' or 'gave it to me.' Also add 'that' to link clauses. Suggestion: use 'gave me' or 'gave it to me' and include 'that' for clarity.