Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更直接并减少重复，第一句应直接回应问题，其次用一到两句补充具体原因，注意语法时态和连贯性。可以把“I choose this field because”改为“I chose this field because”或“I am interested in…”。

Exemplo: I am a student at China Pharmaceutical University, where I study pharmacy. I chose this field because I am interested in drug development and want to help people stay healthy.

Sugestão: 回答存在时态和语法错误并且有重复（"books and books"），应直接说现在在哪里学习，使用正确时态并删除赘词，提供一两项具体资源作为支持细节。

Exemplo: I usually study in the university library because it is quiet and offers many textbooks and electronic resources that I need for my courses.

Sugestão: 回答结构基本合适，但内容有些重复（与上一题类似）。可以增加具体细节或例子，使用连词使表述更连贯，例如说明哪类资源或什么时候最安静。

Exemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because it is usually quiet in the mornings and has subject-specific books and online databases that help me with research.

Sugestão: 句子语法有明显错误并且表达不够清晰，应使用条件结构或情态动词表达希望的改变，具体说明哪些方面需要改进（例如扩大空间、增加座位、延长开放时间）。尽量用一至两句说明原因和可能的结果。

Exemplo: I wish the library would be expanded and have more seats, because currently there is not enough space and students often have to arrive very early to find a spot.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且句子未结束。应直接给出计划并补充具体原因或时间安排，使用一到两句说明为什么读博士以及希望研究的方向。

Exemplo: I plan to pursue a doctorate in pharmacy after I finish my undergraduate degree, because I want to specialize in drug development and conduct research that could lead to better treatments.

× Do you work or are you a student? I'm currently a student at China Pharmaceutical University studying pharmacy.

✓ I am currently a student at China Pharmaceutical University, studying pharmacy.

原句中連句子結構沒大錯，但口語中用縮寫"I'm"可以接受；此處更正式的表達應使用完整句子並用逗號分隔主從句，保持時態一致。建議在正式回答中使用"I am"並用逗號連接現在分詞短語以更清晰地表達現在進行的學習狀態。

× I choose this field because I'm interested in drug development and helping people stay healthy.

✓ I chose this field because I'm interested in drug development and in helping people stay healthy.

原句使用了過去選擇的動作，應使用過去式"chose"（或明確表達為現在仍持續的選擇用"choose"需語境支持）。此外，並列不定式/動名詞時前面加介詞"in"會更自然："interested in ... and in helping ..."。建議使用過去式表達既定的選擇原因，並在並列項目前加上相同介詞保持平行結構。

× I started at the library because it's quiet and have many books and books and resources available.

✓ I study at the library because it's quiet and has many books and resources available.

原句中時態和主謂搭配混亂："I started at the library"（我開始在圖書館）與後半句不匹配，且主語是"it"時動詞應為"has"而不是"have"。另外有重複詞"books and books"。建議用現在時表達習慣（"I study at the library"），並修正主謂一致（"it has"），刪除重複詞。

× I usually study at the library because it's quiet and I can really focus. In addition, there are many books and resources available.

✓ I usually study at the library because it's quiet and I can really focus. In addition, there are many books and resources available.

此句語法正確，時態一致，無需修改。保持原句即可。

× I would like my school library could change because it's space too small and not enough seats so that students have to get up early and for a seat.

✓ I would like my school library to be changed because the space is too small and there are not enough seats, so students have to get up early to get a seat.

原句結構錯亂："I would like my school library could change"是不正確的表達。請用不定式或被動結構（如"to be changed"或"I wish the library would change"）。另外"it's space too small"應為"the space is too small"，主謂一致；"not enough seats"前需要存在動詞（there are）。最後片語"get up early and for a seat"應為"get up early to get a seat"表示目的。建議使用簡單明確的句型："I would like... to be changed"或"I wish the library would change"。

× I plan to study for my doctorate because.

✓ I plan to study for my doctorate.

原句不完整，以"because"做連接詞後應有原因從句，但沒有接續內容，導致句子不完整。修正方法有兩種：刪掉多餘的"because"以得到完整陳述句，或在"because"後補上原因。例如："I plan to study for my doctorate because I want to become a researcher." 建議在口語回答中，如果沒有接續理由就不要使用"because"。