Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要注意时态与语法准确，句子要更简洁，并补充连接词使表达更自然。比如把“I choosing major”改为“I chose this major”或“I am majoring in… because”。此外可在最后加一句具体的理由或例子让内容更丰富。

Exemplo: I'm a fourth-year student majoring in theater and film directing. I chose this major because I love storytelling and want to work as a director after graduation, for example by directing short films during my university projects.

Sugestão: 避免重复信息（已在上一题提过年级与专业），改善语法和发音停顿问题。将句子合并并使用连接词，使回答更流畅，例如说清具体的实践经历。

Exemplo: I study at Sichuan University of Media and Communications, where I major in theater and film directing and gain a lot of hands-on experience, such as working on short student films and stage productions.

Sugestão: 注意词汇准确性（'crosses'应为 'courses'，'ends on practice'不恰当），并用连接词解释原因。可以举一两个具体课程或实践活动作为支持细节。

Exemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because the filmmaking program offers courses like audience studies, visual language, and film editing, and many modules include practical projects where students make short films.

Sugestão: 改进词汇与句子结构（'size up to date research'→'access up-to-date research'，'It can much easier'→'It would make it much easier'），并用连词说明具体好处和一个例子。

Exemplo: Yes, I'd like the library to offer more digital resources, such as e-books and online journals, because that would make it much easier to access up-to-date research when preparing projects and collaborating with classmates.

Sugestão: 注意冠词和词序（'in next 5 years'→'in the next five years'；删掉不必要的'a'），并更具体说明怎么结合AI（例如学习哪些技能或参加哪些课程），用连接词组织想法。

Exemplo: In the next five years I plan to combine filmmaking with artificial intelligence by studying digital filmmaking techniques and AI-driven design tools, such as learning machine-learning-based editing software to create more efficient workflows and experimental visuals.

× I choosing major because I love storytelling and hope to work as a director after graduation.

✓ I chose the major because I love storytelling and hope to work as a director after graduation.

错误类型：现在时使用不当（应使用过去式或完成时表示已做出的决定）。该句中使用现在分词 "choosing" 不符合标准句子结构。建议使用过去式 “chose” 表示“我当初选择专业”的动作已发生；若想强调持续影响可用现在完成时 “I have chosen the major”。另外，句中缺少冠词 “the major” 更符合英语习惯。建议：把动词换为适当时态并补充冠词。

× I study at Sichuan University of Media and Communications and I'm in fourth year.

✓ I study at Sichuan University of Media and Communications and I'm in my fourth year.

错误类型：现在时/表达方式问题及冠词缺失。短语 “in fourth year” 缺少物主代词或冠词，英语中通常说 “in my fourth year”。建议在“fourth”前加上“my”以明确所有关系。

× Uh. I major in theater and film directing which give me many hands on experience.

✓ I major in theater and film directing, which gives me a lot of hands-on experience.

错误类型：主谓一致与词形问题（属于现在时问题和主谓一致）。关系从句中主语是单数概念（the major / the course），动词应为单数形式 “gives”。此外 “hands on” 应连字符为“hands-on”，并且 “many hands-on experience” 不自然，改为 “a lot of hands-on experience” 更符合惯用表达。建议注意主谓一致并使用正确的复合形容词和量词搭配。

× Yes, my university offers a filmmaking major that covers crosses such as audience studies, visual language, and film editing.

✓ Yes, my university offers a filmmaking major that covers courses such as audience studies, visual language, and film editing.

错误类型：介词/词汇使用错误。原句使用了错误单词 “crosses”，应为 “courses”（课程）。这是词汇选择错误，不是介词，但在给定列表中最接近的是“Incorrect use of prepositions/words” —— 这里把它归为词汇使用错误。建议记住常用单词拼写并检查近义词。

× These modules include a lot of ends on practice so students get practical experience making films.

✓ These modules include a lot of hands-on practice so students get practical experience making films.

错误类型：形容词/副词或短语使用错误。原句 “ends on practice” 是错误拼写/词序，正确短语为 “hands-on practice”。建议学习并使用固定短语（collocations），如 “hands-on practice” 表示实践性训练。

× Yes, I hope my university can provide more digital resources in the library such as ebooks because this would help students size up to date research.

✓ Yes, I hope my university can provide more digital resources in the library, such as e-books, because this would help students access up-to-date research.

错误类型：量词/动词用法与词汇错误。原句中的 “size up to date research” 不合语法和意义，应为 “access up-to-date research” 表示“获取最新研究”。另外 “ebooks” 建议写作 “e-books”。建议使用正确动词搭配（access）和连接词，并注意连字符和复合形容词（up-to-date）。

× It can much easier for us to prepare projects and stay engaged with our subjects.

✓ It can make it much easier for us to prepare projects and stay engaged with our subjects.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用或句子结构错误。原句缺少动词 “make” 并且结构不完整，应为 “It can make it much easier for us...”。建议在类似结构中使用完整的使役结构 “make it + adjective” 来表达“使……更容易”。

× Well, I have several study plans in next 5 years.

✓ Well, I have several study plans for the next five years.

错误类型：将来时间状语使用不当。短语应为 “for the next five years” 或 “in the next five years”；此外数字在正式写作中建议用词写出或写全称（five）。建议使用固定搭配 “in/for the next ... years”。

× I want to combine my major with artificial intelligence such as a digital filmmaking, digital design and so on because I believe AI is a good partner for my desired work.

✓ I want to combine my major with artificial intelligence, such as digital filmmaking, digital design, and so on, because I believe AI is a good partner for my desired work.

错误类型：介词/冠词与词组使用错误。原句在 “such as a digital filmmaking” 中多余使用了不定冠词 “a”（digital filmmaking 是不可数或抽象名词短语，不用 a）。此外在列举时用逗号分隔更清晰。建议去掉不必要的冠词并注意列举格式。