Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn; sửa lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: tên trường, ngành, thì). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề; dùng 2–3 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể (thời gian học, chuyên ngành, hoạt động học tập). Tránh nói lấp lửng (‘uh’, ‘wells’) và sửa từ sai (‘glasses’ → ‘classes’).

Exemplo: I'm a student at Hanoi University of Science and Technology. I'm studying Business Administration and have been studying there for two years. I often attend classes and work on group projects.

Sugestão: Cần phát âm tên trường và khoa chính xác; sắp xếp câu theo cấu trúc rõ ràng: nơi + khoa + thời gian. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (giúp chỉnh thì và đại từ). Nên dùng linking word nếu thêm chi tiết (‘and’, ‘so’, ‘for’).

Exemplo: I study at Hanoi University of Science and Technology, in the Faculty of Information Technology. I have been studying there for two years and I focus on software development courses.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng thiếu từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu 2-3 lí do cụ thể với linking words (for example, because). Sửa các lỗi từ (play → place, wise → quiet, consciously be better → study better).

Exemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because it is quiet and there are few distractions. For example, the library has comfortable chairs and good lighting, which helps me concentrate and study more effectively.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi từ vựng; cần nêu rõ thay đổi mong muốn (ví dụ: thêm chỗ ngồi, mở rộng phòng học). Dùng cấu trúc If + would/could hoặc I would like + to + động từ; tránh từ lỗi (‘chess and picks’ không hiểu).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the university to add more study spaces and seats because the library is often too crowded. If they provided more quiet rooms, students could study more comfortably.

Sugestão: Nên nói rõ kế hoạch với cấu trúc I plan to + động từ; sửa các lỗi từ vựng (computers systems → computer systems, rogument → programming, enroll my job → improve my job prospects). Thêm lý do cụ thể và kết thúc gọn trong 2–3 câu.

Exemplo: I plan to study computer systems at university next year because I want to learn programming and improve my job prospects. This course will help me gain technical skills needed for a career in IT.

× I study and Hannah University in my mature it is business, uh administration.

✓ I study at Hannah University; my major is Business Administration.

The student used incorrect prepositions and word forms. Use 'study at' for institutions and 'major' not 'mature'; 'Business Administration' is the correct noun phrase. Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'study at a university', 'my major is ...'.

× So I take glasses and do project.

✓ So I take classes and do projects.

'Glasses' is a wrong word choice for 'classes' and singular/plural mismatch with 'project'. Use 'take classes' and plural 'projects' to match general activity. Suggestion: check homophones and ensure subject-verb and plural consistency.

× I think student is there for two years.

✓ I think I have been a student there for two years.

Tense and subject are incorrect. To express continuing action from past to present, use present perfect 'have been'. Also include subject 'I' and article 'a'. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions that started in past and continue now.

× Well, I study as Hanoi utility of CCT and technology.

✓ Well, I study at Hanoi University of Science and Technology.

Preposition 'at' is used for institutions. The institution name was mis-phrased; correct name pattern 'University of ...'. Suggestion: use 'study at [university name]'.

× I'm in their faculty arm of Information technology and I helping study India for two years.

✓ I'm in the Faculty of Information Technology and I have been studying it for two years.

Incorrect pronouns and word forms: 'their faculty arm' is wrong — use 'Faculty of Information Technology'. Use present perfect continuous or present perfect 'have been studying' to indicate duration. 'India' is incorrect word here; likely meant 'here' or 'it'. Suggestion: use correct faculty naming and proper tense for duration.

× Yes, uh I think it's a good play to studies because it's wise and there are few distraction.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it's quiet and there are few distractions.

Multiple word choice errors: 'play' -> 'place', 'studies' -> 'study' (infinitive), 'wise' -> 'quiet' or 'nice' depending on meaning, and plural 'distractions'. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjectives and match verb forms.

× It has comfortable chair and good lighting so I can consciously be better for.

✓ It has comfortable chairs and good lighting, so I can concentrate and study better.

Noun number: 'chair' should be plural 'chairs'. 'Consciously be better for' is ungrammatical — use 'concentrate' or 'study better'. Suggestion: use plural when generalizing and clear verbs for intended meaning.

× Well, I would like the place where I study to chess and picks because the libraries is options crowded.

✓ Well, I would like the place where I study to change and improve because the libraries are often crowded.

Multiple errors: 'chess and picks' are wrong words — likely 'change and be better' or 'change and improve'. 'Libraries is options crowded' should be 'libraries are often crowded'. Use plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: pick correct verbs and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well, I plans to study computers systems as university next year because I want to learn rogument and enroll my job.

✓ Well, I plan to study computer systems at university next year because I want to learn programming and improve my job prospects.

Verb 'plans' should be 'plan' to match subject 'I'. Use 'computer systems' (adjective-noun order), preposition 'at university', and correct word choices: 'programming' instead of 'rogument', 'improve my job prospects' instead of 'enroll my job'. Suggestion: check subject-verb agreement and choose correct career-related nouns.

× Uh, role respect.

✓ Uh, that's my goal regarding my career.

This fragment is incomplete and unclear. Provide a full sentence explaining intended meaning. Suggestion: avoid fragments; express ideas with subject and verb.