Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 总体内容清晰，直接回答问题并给出原因和具体活动。但存在语句冗长、个别词汇使用不准（如“expressions”“My Portfolio”大小写），以及句子衔接略显生硬。建议：1) 控制在最多5句内，保持简洁；2) 用更自然的动词短语（例如 “work on design projects” 而不是 “take part in student design projects and expressions”）；3) 注意大小写和冠词（a/the）；4) 使用连接词使句子更流畅，比如 “so” 或 “and” 引出结果或细节。

Exemplo: I'm a student majoring in Visual Communication Design at Jiangsu University because I'm interested in graphic design and visual storytelling. I work on student design projects to develop practical skills and build a portfolio. This hands-on experience helps me prepare for a creative career.

Sugestão: 回答直接但存在语法和表达错误（“develop the practice or in design stairs” 和 “open projects” 不明确）。建议：1) 使用清晰准确的短语描述课程内容，如 “develop practical skills in design”；2) 用具体例子说明如何与同学合作，例如 “group projects” 或 “collaborative assignments”；3) 保持句子简短，并使用连接词如 “and” 或 “which” 来衔接信息。

Exemplo: I study at Jiangsu University, where I'm pursuing a bachelor's degree in Visual Communication Design. The program helps me develop practical skills in design, and I often collaborate with classmates on group projects and exhibitions.

Sugestão: 回答结构合理，但存在措辞不当（如 “learn many knowledge” 应为 “learn a lot” 或 “gain knowledge”），以及表达可更具体。建议：1) 用更地道的短语（例如 “gain knowledge” 或 “improve skills”）；2) 提供更具体的例子或细节（例如图书馆资源、工作坊主题）；3) 使用连接词如 “for example” 来引出例子但避免重复信息。

Exemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because the campus is quiet and there are well-equipped libraries and study spaces. For example, study groups and academic workshops on topics like typography and user research are very helpful.

Sugestão: 观点明确且相关，但有语法和词汇错误（如 “much easily”, “persuadations” 拼写错误，应为 “presentations” 或 “persuasions”）并有冗长表达。建议：1) 用正确短语如 “much easier”；2) 具体说明 Wi‑Fi 改善会带来的直接影响（例如更流畅的 Zoom 会议、快速查资料）；3) 将句子拆分以提高清晰度并控制句数。

Exemplo: Yes, I'd like faster Wi‑Fi on campus because it would make group video calls and online research much easier. For example, faster internet would help our teams collaborate smoothly on Zoom when preparing presentations and improve overall productivity.

Sugestão: 目标明确，包含研究方向，但有语法小问题（如 “research studies” 冗余， “design influence” 应为 “design influences”），以及可以更具体说明计划细节（如硕士、实习或项目）。建议：1) 使用简洁准确的表达，例如 “pursue a master's” 或 “conduct research on…”；2) 提供具体方法或方向（例如用户研究、品牌案例分析）；3) 保持句数在五句以内并使用连接词如 “so that” 或 “for example”。

Exemplo: I plan to continue studying graphic design, possibly by pursuing a master's degree focused on visual communication. I want to research how design influences everyday life, for example by studying user‑centered branding and conducting case studies on consumer responses.

× I also take part in student design projects and expressions to build My Portfolio.

✓ I also take part in student design projects and exhibitions to build my portfolio.

句中“expressions”用词不当，应为“exhibitions（展览）”或“experiments”等，且“My Portfolio”中的大写不正确。另“take part in ... to build”结构可以保留。建议使用小写“my portfolio”。（错误类型：动词后接 -ing 表达或名词搭配不当，改为更合适的名词）

× This course helps me develop the practice or in design stairs and collaborate closely with my classmates on open projects.

✓ This course helps me develop practical design skills and collaborate closely with my classmates on open projects.

原句“develop the practice or in design stairs”词序混乱且用词错误，应为“develop practical design skills”来表达“培养实践设计能力”。属于句子结构和搭配错误，需重组短语以清晰表达意思。

× The environment is quiet, with libraries and study spaces that help students connect with others and learn many knowledge.

✓ The environment is quiet, with libraries and study spaces that help students connect with others and learn a lot of knowledge.

“many knowledge”不正确，knowledge為不可數名詞，不能用“many”。應使用“a lot of knowledge”或“much knowledge”。此為量詞使用錯誤。

× I would like faster Wi-Fi in my studies place because it would make group video calls and online research much easily.

✓ I would like faster Wi-Fi in my study place because it would make group video calls and online research much easier.

“much easily”搭配錯誤，應使用形容詞“easier”來修飾名詞短語“group video calls and online research”。此外“studies place”應為“study place”。屬於副詞/形容詞位置或形式使用錯誤。

× This would help students work on collaborative projects more easily, for example while preparing group persuadations and immediately improve academic results and support students well-being.

✓ This would help students work on collaborative projects more easily, for example while preparing group presentations, immediately improving academic results and supporting students' well-being.

“persuadations”拼写错误且用词不当，应为“presentations”。另外并列结构需要一致性：使用动名词短语“improving”与“supporting”，并在“students' well-being”中加所有格。属于名词/形容词使用及句子结构错误。

× I plan to continue my studies in graphic design and develop my research studies.

✓ I plan to continue my studies in graphic design and develop my research.

“develop my research studies”重复啰嗦，应简化为“develop my research”。这是时态/用词冗余问题，保持一般现在时表达未来计划，但应使用简洁名词短语。

× I want to focus on visual communication design and study how design influence everyday life, for example by researching user-centered branding.

✓ I want to focus on visual communication design and study how design influences everyday life, for example by researching user-centered branding.

主语“design”是第三人称单数，動詞需用“influences”而非“influence”。此為主謂一致錯誤（Subject-verb agreement）。