Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答案需要更自然且句子结构正确。注意时态和主谓一致（e.g. “I major in”），避免冗长或重复，用一到两句直接回答，然后补充一到两句具体细节（比如课程、导师或社团）。使用连词使表达连贯。

Exemplo: I’m a student majoring in Big Data at Mingzhu University in Hainan. I enjoy my course because the lecturers are very supportive, and I’m involved in a data science club where we work on real projects.

Sugestão: 回答要用正确的时态和更精炼的表达。先直接说学校位置，再给出一两个具体理由或例子（如环境、设施或生活便利），避免重复相同描述如“beautiful”。

Exemplo: I study at Minsu University in Hainan, which is a coastal city. The campus is near the sea, so I often go to the beach after classes to relax and clear my mind.

Sugestão: 注意用词准确（例如不要用“aggressive”表达喜欢），并保持句子简洁。先直答（Yes/No），然后用一两句说明理由，包含具体细节（如安静的图书馆、良好教学资源），并用连接词使逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, it’s a good place to study because the campus is quiet and the libraries are well-equipped. The fresh air and peaceful environment help me concentrate on my assignments.

Sugestão: 回答结构较清楚，但可以更具体并减少口头停顿。先给出总体意见，然后列出一两条具体改进建议（如交通、实习机会或企业合作），并说明原因和可能效果。

Exemplo: Yes, I think Ling Shui should receive more government investment to create job opportunities. For example, improving public transport and encouraging tech companies to set up internships would help graduates find work locally.

Sugestão: 表达目标明确但需更流畅并纠正语法（e.g. “cities” → “city”; “study in Hangzhou”直接说）。可以说明具体计划（想学的课程、想申请的学校或职业目标）并用一到两个连接词增强条理性。

Exemplo: I plan to continue my studies in Hangzhou, which has excellent universities and tech companies. I want to take advanced Big Data courses and secure internships there to help me find a job in data engineering after graduation.

× I'm a student who majoring in Big data at Mingzhu University in Hainan.

✓ I'm a student who majors in Big Data at Mingzhu University in Hainan.

句中使用關係代詞 who 後需接完整的謂語動詞，不可使用現在分詞單獨表達一般現在時的動作。應使用第三人稱單數動詞形式 majors（或使用 who am majoring → I am majoring）。建議改為 “who majors” 或把句子拆為 “I'm a student majoring in Big Data”/“I major in Big Data”。（简体中文：关系代词 who 后需要完整谓语，主语是第三人称单数，动词需加 -s。）

× I'm very satisfied with my subject because teachers was are very supporting and I'm very enjoying my campus life.

✓ I'm very satisfied with my subject because the teachers are very supportive and I'm enjoying my campus life.

原句有多处主谓一致和词类错误：teachers 为复数，谓语应为 are，而不是 was；supporting 用法不当，应为形容词 supportive 来修饰 teachers；enjoying 前不需 very（可保留但常见用法为 simply 'I'm enjoying'），enjoy 为感受动词，使用现在进行时 'I'm enjoying' 表示正在享受校园生活。建议：注意主语单复数和动词形式一致，选择正确词类（形容词 vs 动名词）。（简体中文）

× Now I'm studied in Minsu University in Hainan.

✓ Now I'm studying at Minsu University in Hainan.

此句想表达现在正在就读，應使用现在进行时 studying 而不是过去式 studied；介词搭配为 study at a university，更常用 at 而非 in。建议使用现在进行时表示当前正在进行的动作，并注意介词搭配。（简体中文）

× Hainan is a very beautiful city where the sea is very blue and beautiful.

✓ Hainan is a very beautiful place where the sea is very blue.

句中重复使用 beautiful 造成冗余且不够地道，应避免形容词重复；city 与前文描述岛屿/省份不太匹配，改用 place 更合适（或说 Hainan is a beautiful province/island）。保持简洁自然的形容词使用。（简体中文）

× When I study here, I'm very enjoyable with the beautiful views.

✓ When I study here, I really enjoy the beautiful views.

enjoyable 是形容词，意为“令人愉快的”，不能用来描述人的感受；人应该使用动词 enjoy 或形容词的体验性表达 like/am happy。且介词 with 在此不合适，通常直接宾语 beautiful views。建议用 I enjoy 或 I am happy with 表达感受。 （简体中文）

× Yes, I'm very aggressive with it.

✓ Yes, I really like it.

aggressive 意为“好斗的/积极进取的”，用来表达喜欢某地不恰当。应使用 like/enjoy 等词表达喜好。并且 with it 用法不自然。建议用 I really like it / I'm very fond of it。 （简体中文）

× The environment is very calm and beautiful so that I can cons, I can completely concentrate with my learning subject was more the air was very fresh there.

✓ The environment is very calm and beautiful, so I can completely concentrate on my studies. Also, the air there is very fresh.

原句结构混乱：so that + 从句用法不当并插入口误；cons 不是完整单词，应为 concentrate；concentrate 后接介词 on 而不是 with；learning subject 用法不自然，改为 studies 或 my subject；句末 'was more the air was very fresh there' 是语法断裂，应拆成独立句。建议重组句子，确保主谓一致并使用正确介词。 （简体中文）

× Uh, I think, uh, in Hainan, Ling Shui, the government should invest more funding to support the development of the small city to have more chance for people to work.

✓ Uh, I think that in Hainan, Lingshui, the government should invest more funding to support the development of the small city so that people have more job opportunities.

原句介词与短语搭配不够自然：invest funding 可接受但更自然说 invest more in the development 或 provide more funding；to have more chance for people to work 用法不地道，应改为 so that people have more job opportunities 或 provide more chances for people to find work。建议调整短语顺序并使用常见搭配。 （简体中文）

× I hope I could, uh, study in Hangzhou, a very beautiful and historical cities, umm, and I hope I can learn more things about big data and find my, uh, dream job there.

✓ I hope I can study in Hangzhou, a very beautiful and historic city, and I hope I can learn more about big data and find my dream job there.

使用希望表达未来应使用 can 或 will 而不是 could（could 更倾向于过去或礼貌可能）；cities 与 Hangzhou 不匹配，應用單數 city；historical 常用于“有历史的”，更自然用 historic；learn more things about 用法冗长，改为 learn more about。建议使用一致的时态并修正名词单复数及形容词选择。 （简体中文）