Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cümledeki zaman ve yaş ifadelerini düzeltin, gereksiz duraksamalar ve tekrarları azaltın. Cevabınız kısa ve doğrudan olmalı; bir konu cümlesi ile başlayıp gerekirse bir veya iki ek detay verin. Örneğin yaş ifade ederken "I'm 14" veya "I'm 14 years old" kullanın ve "I study at high school in Turkey" gibi daha doğal bir yapı tercih edin.

Exemplo: I'm a student. I'm 14 years old and I study at a high school in Turkey.

Sugestão: Yer ve kurum isimlerini kesin ve doğru söyleyin; rakamları ve yaş ifadelerini tutarlı kullanın. Gereksiz açıklamalardan kaçının ve cümleleri basit ve net kurun. Eğer okulunuzun adını biliyorsanız doğru telaffuzunu denemeye çalışın veya sadece şehir/şube belirtin.

Exemplo: I study at Zonglac High School in Turkey, which is in my hometown.

Sugestão: Olumlu görüşünüzü doğrudan belirtip ardından iki veya üç spesifik neden verin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, and) kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örneğin "my school has" yerine "my school have" yanlış).

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I love my school because it offers many activities, such as costume parties and school camps, which help students relax and make friends.

Sugestão: Cevabınızı netleştirin: değişiklik istemiyorsanız bunun sebebini açık ve kısa şekilde verin. Gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden (umm, like) kaçının ve yer tanımlamalarında daha düzgün cümleler kurun. Örneğin çevredeki olanakların adlarını veya ağaç, bahçe gibi özellikleri belirtin.

Exemplo: I'm happy with my school and wouldn't change much because it has a pleasant campus with many trees and it's conveniently close to shops and public transport.

Sugestão: Kariyer hedefinizi ve planınızı daha doğru dilbilgisiyle ifade edin. "I want to become a genetic engineer" gibi doğru meslek ifadelerini kullanın. Yurt dışında okumak istediğinizi söylerken ülkeleri düzgün bir liste halinde verin ve nedenlerini ekleyin kısa ve net bir şekilde belirtin.

Exemplo: I want to become a genetic engineer. Although I'm only 14 and my plans may change, I hope to study abroad in countries like the USA, Canada, or Italy because they have strong university programs in genetics.

× I am a student, I'm only 14 years ago and I still, umm, take my education on high school in Turkey.

✓ I am a student. I'm only 14 years old and I am still studying in high school in Turkey.

Student used 'years' incorrectly and mixed verb forms. Use 'years old' for age and say 'studying in high school' for current ongoing education. Suggestion: use simple present progressive 'I am still studying' or simple present 'I study' for regular action.

× I study in Turkey on Zonglac.

✓ I study in Zonglac, Turkey.

Preposition 'in' is used for countries and cities; 'on' is incorrect. Place names should be 'in Zonglac, Turkey.' Use 'in' before city and country.

× That College in deserted umm.

✓ That college is in a deserted area.

Original lacks a verb and article; 'college' should be lowercase and needs 'is' and an article before 'deserted area.' Suggestion: include a linking verb and proper noun capitalization.

× Like I studied tat ink tat college like 11 years.

✓ I studied at that college for about 11 years.

Use past tense 'studied' correctly with preposition 'at' and 'for' to indicate duration. 'Tat ink tat' is unclear; correct to 'that college.' Use 'about' or 'around' for approximation.

× That's a lot because I'm only 40.

✓ That's a lot because I'm only 14.

Age is inconsistent; student earlier said 14. Use consistent and correct present tense information. Ensure numbers reflect factual consistency.

× My school have a lot of activities like costume party or pajama party or like do a camp on school garden.

✓ My school has a lot of activities like costume parties, pajama parties, and school garden camps.

Subject 'school' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have.' Use plural for multiple activities and correct noun phrases: 'costume parties' and 'pajama parties.' Use 'school garden camps' or 'camps in the school garden.'

× These are really fun activities.

✓ These activities are really fun.

Sentence is acceptable but word order improved: 'These activities are really fun.' In spoken English original is okay; improving word order increases clarity.

× Umm, actually I'm not sure, but probably no because my school has a really good like place.

✓ Actually, I'm not sure, but probably not, because my school has a really good environment.

Use 'probably not' to negate. 'Place' is vague; 'environment' or 'facilities' is clearer. Avoid filler 'like' in formal speech.

× It's around uh, like my school around has many of umm, like trees and my school is really close to shopping centers or.

✓ The area around my school has many trees, and my school is really close to shopping centers.

Remove redundant 'around' and 'my school around.' Use 'the area around my school' and plural 'shopping centers.' Avoid trailing 'or.'

× I wanna be genetic engineering for my adult life.

✓ I want to be a genetic engineer in my adult life.

Use 'want to' instead of 'wanna' in written form. 'Genetic engineer' is the correct noun for a profession; 'genetic engineering' is the field. Use 'a' before a singular profession.

× I'm only 14 and I'm not sure for my choices but I want to study on abroad like USA, Canada or Italy or like maybe England I don't know but I really want to study abroad as soon as possible.

✓ I'm only 14 and I'm not sure about my choices, but I want to study abroad in the USA, Canada, Italy, or maybe England. I really want to study abroad as soon as possible.

Use 'not sure about' instead of 'not sure for.' Use 'study abroad' (no preposition 'on') and 'in the USA' or 'in Canada.' Improve punctuation and remove repetitive 'like.' Split into two sentences for clarity.