Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Antwort klar, aber etwas umgangssprachlich und leicht ungenau (‚master study‘). Verwenden Sie korrektere Formulierungen und vermeiden Sie unnötige Wörter. Geben Sie ein präzises Thema-Satz und ggf. kurze Ergänzung.

Exemplo: I'm currently a student; I will soon start a master's programme. I finished my bachelor's last year, so this master's is the next step in my studies.

Sugestão: Die Antwort ist direkt, aber etwas subjektiv und wortwörtlich. Verwenden Sie korrekte Bezeichnungen (master's degree, LMU Munich) und fügen Sie einen konkreten Grund hinzu statt nur eine Bewertung.

Exemplo: I'll be studying for a master's degree at LMU Munich. I chose LMU because it has strong research in my field and offers excellent industry connections.

Sugestão: Antwort ist etwas umständlich mit Wiederholungen und Grammatikfehlern (›one of my best friend, she‹). Strukturieren Sie klarer: direkte Meinung plus konkretes Beispiel, nutzen Sie Verknüpfungswörter korrekt.

Exemplo: I think it's a great place to study because my close friend studied there and praised the city's atmosphere and university facilities. For example, she often mentioned the accessible libraries and cultural life.

Sugestão: Gute direkte Antwort, aber Satzbau und Wortwahl können verbessert werden (Kommafehler, ‚it right here‘). Geben Sie ein kurzes Detail, was Sie an der Stadt mögen, um die Antwort zu konkretisieren.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't change it because I love Düsseldorf, where I did my bachelor's. It's compact and well-organised, with good public transport and plenty of cafés for studying.

Sugestão: Klare Information, aber grammatikalische Fehler (master's degree, any more -> any more studies) und leichte Ungenauigkeit. Formulieren Sie kurz und präzise, nennen Sie ggf. berufliche Pläne statt nur Negation.

Exemplo: I plan to complete my master's degree at LMU in two years. After graduating, I intend to start working in my field rather than pursue further studies.

× I'm currently a student, but I'm about to enter the university for my master study.

✓ I'm currently a student, but I'm about to enter the university for my master's studies.

Use the noun form 'master's' with possessive apostrophe to refer to the degree and plural 'studies' or 'programme' is more natural in English. Also 'master study' is not idiomatic. Suggestion: say 'master's degree' or 'master's programme'.

× I'm going to start my master degree in Munich at the university LMU because it is the best university in Germany.

✓ I'm going to start my master's degree in Munich at Ludwig-Maximilians-Universität (LMU) because it is one of the best universities in Germany.

Use 'master's degree' not 'master degree'. Also use 'one of the best' rather than absolute 'the best' unless certain. Include correct name format for the university if needed. Ensure article 'the' before 'university' when specifying: 'at the university, LMU' or simply 'at LMU'.

× Yes, I can imagine that because one of my best friend, she went to Munich to study her bachelor degree too, and she told me that the city is absolutely beautiful and a great place to study.

✓ Yes, I can imagine that because one of my best friends went to Munich to study her bachelor's degree too, and she told me that the city is absolutely beautiful and a great place to study.

Use plural 'friends' after 'one of my' and remove the redundant subject 'she' (causes a fragment/extra pronoun). Also use 'bachelor's degree' with possessive form. Combine clauses properly: 'one of my best friends went...' rather than 'one of my best friend, she went...'.

× No, I don't think so because I love the city where I got my bachelor degree it right here in Dusseldorf.

✓ No, I don't think so because I love the city where I got my bachelor's degree; it's right here in Düsseldorf.

Use 'bachelor's degree' with possessive. Also sentence contained a run-on: add punctuation and contraction 'it's' for 'it is'. Use correct spelling 'Düsseldorf' or 'Dusseldorf' consistently. Use semicolon or separate sentences to avoid comma splice.

× It's a beautiful city, not too big but still convenient.

✓ It's a beautiful city: not too big, but very convenient.

Add a comma after 'big' and optionally 'very' to sound natural. Use colon or dash to introduce the description. This corrects minor punctuation and improves natural phrasing.

× I'm going to finish my master degree in two years at the university in Munich and after that I don't plan to do anymore study.

✓ I'm going to finish my master's degree in two years at the university in Munich, and after that I don't plan to do any more study.

Use 'master's degree' and 'any more' (two words) for the negative form. Alternatively use 'any more studies' or 'any more studying'. Also add comma before 'and' to separate clauses. 'Any more' vs 'anymore' depends on meaning: 'any more' is used before nouns.