Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以更简洁，避免冗余。例如“I'm currently a final-year biomedical engineering student at university, and I will graduate next July.”这样更符合口语表达习惯。

Exemplo: I'm currently a final-year biomedical engineering student at university, and I will graduate next July.

Sugestão: 回答简洁且信息明确，但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅，例如“I'm studying at Shandong University, which is considered one of the most prestigious and famous universities in China.”

Exemplo: I'm studying at Shandong University, which is considered one of the most prestigious and famous universities in China.

Sugestão: 回答内容丰富，但句子之间缺少连接词，建议使用连接词如“Moreover”或“Besides”来增强连贯性。

Exemplo: It's a nice place to study. Moreover, the campus is pretty and the facilities are new. Besides, teachers here are dedicated and supportive, and students are always eager to learn.

Sugestão: 回答中有口语化表达“nothing is perfect, right?”，建议避免口语填充词，且“fails to meet a number of people's appetites”表达不够准确，可以改为“doesn't satisfy many people's tastes”。

Exemplo: Yes, I hope the school can improve the taste of the canteen food. Although it's the second largest in Asia, it doesn't satisfy many people's tastes.

Sugestão: 回答中出现了语法和表达错误，如“the eyes last Test”应为“IELTS test”，且“you know”口语化较强，建议改为更正式表达。

Exemplo: I'm planning to apply for a postgraduate program abroad, so I'm taking the IELTS test because it is a prerequisite.

× I'm going to graduate the next July.

✓ I'm going to graduate next July.

“the next July”中的“the”是不必要的，表示将来的时间时，月份前通常不加冠词。应改为“next July”。

× I'm studying in Shandong University, which is considered one of the most prestigious and famous universities in China.

✓ I'm studying at Shandong University, which is considered one of the most prestigious and famous universities in China.

表示在某个学校学习时，通常用介词“at”而不是“in”。“at”表示在某个具体地点或机构。

× Teachers here are dedicated and supportive.

✓ The teachers here are dedicated and supportive.

在泛指某个群体时，通常需要加定冠词“the”来特指“这里的老师”。

× Students are awesome and are always eager to learn.

✓ The students are awesome and are always eager to learn.

同上，泛指特定群体时应加定冠词“the”，表示“这里的学生”。

× I hope school can improve the taste of the canteen.

✓ I hope the school can improve the taste in the canteen.

“improve the taste of the canteen”表达不准确，应为“improve the taste in the canteen”，表示改善食堂里的食物味道。

× Though it's considered the second largest in Asia, it still fails to meet a number of people's appetites.

✓ Though it's considered the second largest in Asia, it still fails to meet many people's appetites.

“a number of”后接复数名词，表示“许多”，但搭配“fail to meet”时更自然用“many”，且“a number of people's appetites”表达不够准确。

× I'm planning to apply for a postgraduate program abroad and that's why I'm here taking the eyes last Test.

✓ I'm planning to apply for a postgraduate program abroad and that's why I'm here taking the IELTS test.

“taking the eyes last Test”是拼写错误，应为“taking the IELTS test”，IELTS是雅思考试的正确拼写。

× You know it's a prerequisite.

✓ You know it's a prerequisite.

该句无语法错误，结构正确。