Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более прямым и естественным. Избегайте повторений и уточните статус студента более ясно.

Exemplo: I am currently a university student, having just transitioned from high school. I am studying at UH as a foreign-trained student.

Sugestão: Используйте более связные предложения и правильные предлоги. Добавьте связующие слова для плавности речи.

Exemplo: I study at a university located on Green Park University Street. It has many beautiful trees and offers a great view of the mountains, which makes me enjoy studying there.

Sugestão: Сократите избыточные фразы и используйте связующие слова для логичности. Сделайте ответ более структурированным и естественным.

Exemplo: I think it's a great place to study because the green trees and beautiful views help me relax. Moreover, the fresh air makes me feel comfortable and focused, which improves my concentration.

Sugestão: Ответ слишком длинный и немного запутанный. Следует отвечать более прямо, избегая лишних повторов и улучшая грамматику.

Exemplo: I haven't thought about making changes because I am happy with the peaceful and natural environment. It helped me pass my exams, so I wouldn't want to change anything.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные слова и структуру, избегая пауз и повторов.

Exemplo: In the future, I want to become an engineer and work as a director in a manufacturing company. I plan to improve my study skills and gain more experience. Also, I hope to live abroad for my job.

× So currently I moved from high school to university.

✓ So currently I have moved from high school to university.

The sentence uses the simple past tense 'moved' with the adverb 'currently', which indicates a present relevance. The present perfect tense 'have moved' is appropriate to express an action that has recently happened and is relevant now.

× So my university is located on Green Park University St.

✓ So my university is located on Green Park University St.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used here to indicate the location on a street. No correction needed.

× There's a lot of beautiful trees and good view to mountain and I love study there.

✓ There are a lot of beautiful trees and a good view of the mountain, and I love studying there.

'Trees' is plural, so 'there's' should be 'there are'. 'Good view' needs an article 'a'. The preposition 'to' should be 'of' when referring to a view. 'Love study' should be 'love studying' to use the gerund form after 'love'.

× There's a lot of beautiful trees and good view to mountain and I love study there.

✓ There are a lot of beautiful trees and a good view of the mountain, and I love studying there.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect when referring to a view; the correct preposition is 'of'.

× I love study there.

✓ I love studying there.

After verbs like 'love', the gerund form (-ing) of the verb should be used.

× when you got a lot of green trees outside and also good views, you can really relax and feel yourself comfortable and being peaceful in there is a lot of good view and fresh air that help your brain to study harder.

✓ when you have a lot of green trees outside and also good views, you can really relax and feel comfortable and peaceful there. There are a lot of good views and fresh air that help your brain to study harder.

'Got' should be 'have' for present tense. 'Feel yourself comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'feel comfortable'. 'Being peaceful in there' is awkward; better to say 'feel peaceful there'. 'Is a lot of good view' should be 'there are a lot of good views' to match plural. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'fresh air' or rephrase to plural subject.

× So I don't want to 'cause it was hard for me to pass the exam, so I don't want to.

✓ So I don't want to because it was hard for me to pass the exam, so I don't want to.

The contraction ''cause' is informal and unclear here; it should be replaced with 'because' for clarity.

× there's natures, there's really peaceful and silent.

✓ there's nature, it's really peaceful and quiet.

'Natures' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable and singular. 'Silent' is an adjective usually used for people or things; 'quiet' is more appropriate for places.

× So I want to hear my uh study skills and develop my experience.

✓ So I want to improve my study skills and develop my experience.

The verb 'hear' is incorrect in this context; 'improve' fits better with 'study skills'. 'Develop my experience' is acceptable.

× I want to uh live abroad with my umm future job.

✓ I want to live abroad with my future job.

The sentence is mostly correct; filler words 'uh' and 'umm' should be omitted for clarity.