Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly ungrammatical. Try to keep your response concise and grammatically correct by using complete sentences and avoiding run-ons. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I'm currently studying at a university in the UK. At the same time, I work for a Japanese news agency covering science topics like climate change. I came here to deepen my knowledge about these issues because I believe this opportunity is very important.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Make sure to use the correct tense and clarify your points. Also, organise your answer logically and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I study at Source Universities of London, which is well-known, especially among students from developing countries. I enjoy it because I can meet people from over 40 different countries, which is very exciting.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and correct sentence structures to make your answer clearer and more natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe the location of my university is ideal for international students. For example, I can easily visit famous places like British museums and cathedrals, which allows me to experience rich British culture that inspires me.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the university to expand its buildings because it is often too crowded for students to concentrate. For instance, last week I went to the library but couldn't find any available chairs.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to express your ideas more naturally.

Exemplo: After completing my master's degree, I plan to return to Japan and resume working as a journalist. However, in five years, I intend to switch to a different industry because I believe journalism will face challenges competing with AI.

× I'm currently studying at the university in the UK, but I also belong to a Japanese news agency and covering science stories such as climate change and environmental issues.

✓ I'm currently studying at the university in the UK, but I also belong to a Japanese news agency and cover science stories such as climate change and environmental issues.

The verb 'covering' is incorrectly used after 'and' following 'belong to a Japanese news agency'. When two verbs are joined by 'and' and share the same subject, both should be in the base form (infinitive without 'to') or appropriately conjugated. Here, 'cover' should be used instead of 'covering' to maintain parallel structure.

× I studied at the Source Universities of London, which is one of the most famous colleges especially for people in developing countries, and I find a life.

✓ I studied at the Source University of London, which is one of the most famous colleges especially for people in developing countries, and I find life.

The phrase 'Source Universities of London' is incorrect because 'Universities' is plural but the rest of the sentence refers to it as a single college. It should be 'Source University of London'. Also, 'I find a life' is incorrect; 'life' is uncountable here, so the article 'a' should be removed.

× They are quite attractive because I can talk with many people from over the world.

✓ They are quite attractive because I can talk with many people from all over the world.

The phrase 'from over the world' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'from all over the world' to indicate people coming from many different countries globally.

× There are people from over 100 to 40 countries, which makes me excited.

✓ There are people from over 40 to 100 countries, which makes me excited.

The phrase 'from over 100 to 40 countries' is illogical and reversed. The correct order is 'from over 40 to 100 countries' to indicate a range. Also, 'makes me excited' is acceptable but could be improved for naturalness.

× Yes, I think the location of source is one of the best choices especially for international students because I can easily go to the famous destinations such as the British museums and cathedrals.

✓ Yes, I think the location of Source is one of the best choices especially for international students because I can easily go to famous destinations such as British museums and cathedrals.

The word 'source' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun. Also, 'the British museums' is better as 'British museums' without 'the' because it refers to museums in general, not specific ones.

× I can easily get in touch with many rich British culture inspires me.

✓ I can easily get in touch with many aspects of rich British culture that inspire me.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks clarity. 'Get in touch with many rich British culture inspires me' is ungrammatical. It should be restructured to clarify that the speaker is inspired by many aspects of British culture.

× Yes, I want my university to expand buildings more because it seems to be too crowded for everyone to concentrate on studying.

✓ Yes, I want my university to expand the buildings more because it seems to be too crowded for everyone to concentrate on studying.

The noun 'buildings' here refers to specific buildings at the university, so the definite article 'the' is needed before 'buildings'.

× For example, last week I went to the library and I couldn't find any chairs which is available.

✓ For example, last week I went to the library and I couldn't find any chairs which were available.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'chairs' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'were' instead of singular 'is'.

× After getting my masters degree, I plan to go back to Japan and restart working as a journalist.

✓ After getting my master's degree, I plan to go back to Japan and restart working as a journalist.

The phrase 'masters degree' requires an apostrophe to show possession: 'master's degree'.

× But five years later I plan to move to another companies except the journalism institutions because I think it's quite difficult for journalism to compete with AI.

✓ But five years later I plan to move to another company except the journalism institutions because I think it's quite difficult for journalism to compete with AI.

The phrase 'another companies' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns. It should be 'another company'.