Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating information unnecessarily and try to use simpler sentence structures for better fluency.

Exemplo: I am a fourth-year English major at Nanjing University of Information Science and Technology, and I will graduate soon.

Sugestão: Your answer provides good details, but try to avoid repeating the word "beautiful" and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I study in Nanjing, located in central China. It is famous for its parks and historical sites, such as the Confucius Temple and Purple Mountain.

Sugestão: Your answer is brief and lacks clarity. Try to use more precise vocabulary and add linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it's a good place to study because the natural surroundings are peaceful, which helps me concentrate better.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I would like the study place to improve its facilities and add comfortable seating because such changes create a better learning environment.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural by correcting minor grammar errors and using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I plan to study linguistics in Germany because it offers excellent educational resources and beautiful natural surroundings.

× I think it's a good place to study because it provides me with various beautiful nature so that I can focus on my study more.

✓ I think it's a good place to study because it provides me with various beautiful natural scenes so that I can focus on my study more.

The word 'nature' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'various' which is used for countable nouns. To express the idea correctly, 'various beautiful natural scenes' or 'various beautiful aspects of nature' should be used.

× I believe that things that are constantly changing is a good sign because they help create a better studying environment.

✓ I believe that things that are constantly changing are a good sign because they help create a better studying environment.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× My future study plan is to go to abroad to study in Germany, specializing in linguistics.

✓ My future study plan is to go abroad to study in Germany, specializing in linguistics.

The preposition 'to' should not be used before 'abroad'. The correct phrase is 'go abroad' without 'to'.