Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is too long and a bit unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence first, then add one or two supporting details. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer smooth.

Exemplo: I am a student in class 8. Besides studying, I help my mother at home and play with my sister for fun. I focus a lot on my studies to achieve success in the future.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: I study at a well-known school and college in Bangladesh. It is famous for its excellent results in SSC and HSC exams and for offering scholarships to talented students.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has repeated words. Also, some sentences are incomplete or confusing. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because the environment is peaceful. The teachers are friendly and always ready to help us understand difficult topics. This support helps students achieve good academic results.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and politely. Use linking words to explain your reasons and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like some changes. For example, I hope the school can ensure all teachers treat students fairly without discrimination or favoritism.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and has some unclear parts. Try to give a clear topic sentence about your future plans, then add supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeating words and finish your sentences properly.

Exemplo: I plan to study abroad to improve my skills. Currently, I am learning IELTS to prepare for this. My goal is to become a successful architect and make my parents and country proud.

× Actually I am a student of class 8I study and do some other works like I help my mother and play with my sister and other things for my enjoyment and I study a lot for my academic success and future success.

✓ Actually, I am a student of class 8. I study and do some other work like helping my mother and playing with my sister and other things for my enjoyment. I study a lot for my academic success and future success.

The word 'works' is incorrect here because 'work' in this context is an uncountable noun referring to tasks or activities. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity. Use 'work' instead of 'works' when referring to tasks or duties in general.

× I chose study in a school which is idle school and college.

✓ I chose to study in a school which is an ideal school and college.

The verb 'chose' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to study'. Also, 'idle' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'ideal'. Additionally, the article 'an' is needed before 'ideal school' because 'ideal' starts with a vowel sound.

× It is very renowned school in Bangladesh.

✓ It is a very renowned school in Bangladesh.

The indefinite article 'a' is required before 'very renowned school' because 'school' is a singular countable noun and needs an article.

× It is very famous because it's great result in SSC and HSC board also in some scholarship.

✓ It is very famous because of its great results in SSC and HSC boards and also in some scholarships.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; the possessive pronoun 'its' should be used. Also, 'result' should be plural 'results' because it refers to multiple outcomes. 'Board' should be plural 'boards' as there are two boards mentioned. 'Scholarship' should be plural 'scholarships' to match the context.

× Yeah, it's environment is very nice.

✓ Yeah, its environment is very nice.

The contraction 'it's' means 'it is' and is incorrect here. The possessive pronoun 'its' should be used to show possession.

× The the teachers are also friendly and help us to increase our knowledge and and keep our understanding high.

✓ The teachers are also friendly and help us increase our knowledge and keep our understanding high.

The phrase 'help us to increase' is acceptable but 'help us increase' is more natural. Also, the repeated 'and' is a typographical error. The sentence is corrected for clarity and fluency.

× So the trains are also very friendly and they help us in every situation.

✓ So the teachers are also very friendly and they help us in every situation.

The word 'trains' is incorrect; it should be 'teachers' as per context. This is likely a typographical error.

× And the academic section features success also effects.

✓ And the academic section also contributes to our success.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning that the academic section contributes to success.

× I think that I would like to change some things like I want to change the teachers who are very, very impartial, like they do discrimination with us, they do coaching and and did do very wrong with us who are not.

✓ I think that I would like to change some things, like the teachers who are very, very partial; they discriminate against us, do coaching, and do very wrong things to those who are not.

The word 'impartial' means fair, but the context suggests the teachers are biased, so 'partial' is correct. 'Do discrimination with us' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'discriminate against us'. The phrase 'did do very wrong with us who are not' is unclear and corrected to 'do very wrong things to those who are not' for clarity.

× Actually, I wanna go to abroad for studies that are that's why I am learning Ilcs and I wanna build up myself as an architect and grow a powerful image of me as an architect and proud my parents also proud my country and that's why I I.

✓ Actually, I want to go abroad for studies; that's why I am learning IELTS. I want to build myself up as an architect, grow a powerful image as an architect, make my parents proud, and also make my country proud. That's why I...

'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'Go to abroad' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go abroad'. 'Ilcs' is likely a misspelling of 'IELTS', a common English test. The sentence was run-on and needed punctuation and restructuring for clarity. 'Proud my parents' is incorrect; it should be 'make my parents proud'.