Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: คำตอบของคุณดีมากในแง่ของความชัดเจนและเนื้อหา แต่ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และความเป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น คำว่า 'mining operation' ควรใช้รูปพหูพจน์ 'operations' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Exemplo: I graduated two years ago and now work as a mining engineer. My job mainly involves handling explosive materials and ensuring the safety of mining operations.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และความถูกต้องของคำ เช่น 'universities' ควรเป็นเอกพจน์ 'university' และปรับปรุงการใช้สำนวนให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น 'proud of myself' ควรเป็น 'proud of' เท่านั้น

Exemplo: I graduated from Jula Alongkong University, which is the most famous university in Thailand, so I feel very proud of completing my education there.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'provide' ควรเป็น 'provides' และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมแทน 'Plus' เช่น 'Moreover' หรือ 'In addition' เพื่อความเป็นทางการและลื่นไหล

Exemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study because it is located in the city center where trains and buses are very easy to access. Moreover, the university provides many facilities such as libraries and laboratories.

Sugestão: คำตอบควรใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมและปรับปรุงความเป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น แทนที่จะใช้ 'Besides' อาจใช้ 'Furthermore' หรือ 'Also' และปรับปรุงการใช้สำนวนให้ชัดเจนขึ้น

Exemplo: I have already graduated, so I don't really have any interest in that place anymore since I no longer need to attend classes. Also, it was a very good place to start my education.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น 'passion in' ควรเป็น 'passion for' และ 'learning, researching process' ควรปรับเป็น 'learning and research processes' เพื่อความถูกต้องและความเป็นธรรมชาติ

Exemplo: Although I have started my working life, I have no passion for my current job and want to change my career. That's why I plan to study environmental science in Australia because I am interested in learning and research processes now.

× My job mainly involves dealing with explosive materials and ensuring the safety of mining operation.

✓ My job mainly involves dealing with explosive materials and ensuring the safety of mining operations.

The word 'operation' should be plural 'operations' because it refers to multiple mining activities, not just one. In English, when talking about general activities or processes, the plural form is often used.

× I graduated from Jula Alongkong University, which is the most famous universities in Thailand, so I feel very proud to myself for completing my education there.

✓ I graduated from Jula Alongkong University, which is the most famous university in Thailand, so I feel very proud of myself for completing my education there.

The word 'universities' should be singular 'university' because it refers to one specific university. Also, the phrase 'proud to myself' is incorrect; it should be 'proud of myself' to express pride correctly.

× I graduated from Jula Alongkong University, which is the most famous universities in Thailand, so I feel very proud to myself for completing my education there.

✓ I graduated from Jula Alongkong University, which is the most famous university in Thailand, so I feel very proud of myself for completing my education there.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in the phrase 'proud to myself'. The correct preposition is 'of' when expressing pride about oneself.

× Plus the university provide many facilities such as libraries and laboratory.

✓ Plus the university provides many facilities such as libraries and laboratories.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'university'. Also, 'laboratory' should be plural 'laboratories' to match 'libraries' and indicate multiple facilities.

× Plus the university provide many facilities such as libraries and laboratory.

✓ Plus the university provides many facilities such as libraries and laboratories.

The subject 'university' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' to agree in third person singular form.

× That's why I plan to study environmental science in Australia because I am interested in learning, researching process now.

✓ That's why I plan to study environmental science in Australia because I am interested in learning and researching processes now.

The phrase 'learning, researching process' is incorrect. 'Researching' should be connected with 'learning' using 'and', and 'process' should be plural 'processes' to indicate multiple activities.