Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. "There was really nice people and honest" ifadesi yanlış ve anlamsız. Ayrıca, cevap biraz dağınık ve gereksiz detaylar içeriyor. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, doğrudan soruya yanıt verip, destekleyici detayları mantıklı ve akıcı şekilde eklemelisiniz.

Exemplo: I am a high school student and I also work part-time at Istanbul Airport. Last summer, I had the chance to meet some pilots, who were very friendly and honest. I enjoy balancing my studies with work because it helps me gain experience.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. "It is very like lawful statement in Istanbul" ifadesi anlaşılmaz. Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı yapmak için, doğrudan okulunuzu ve bölümünüzü belirtip, neden sevdiğinizi açıklayabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I study international finance at Byram Pasha High School, which is located on the European side of Istanbul. I enjoy this subject because it helps me understand global markets and economic trends.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam sorunları var. "I don't think somebody's a very good place to study" ifadesi yanlış. Ayrıca, gereksiz detaylar ve belirsizlikler mevcut. Daha net ve doğrudan cevap verip, nedenlerini açıklamalısınız.

Exemplo: I don't think my current school is the best place to study because the surrounding streets are often dirty. I had hoped to study in Ankara at a university I liked, but unfortunately, I wasn't accepted due to my grades.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "It's breaking my concentrates" ifadesi yanlış. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla desteklenmeli. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için, soruna ve etkilerine odaklanarak açıklama yapmalısınız.

Exemplo: I would like to change the location of my classroom because it is near a mosque. In the afternoons, the loud prayers make it difficult for us to concentrate, and even the teachers sometimes have to raise their voices to be heard.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda anlam bozuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "Facilitate it is too much good, too much substantial" ifadesi anlamsız. Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı yapmak için, gelecekteki planlarınızı net ve basit cümlelerle ifade edin.

Exemplo: In the future, I want to study tourism translation because I believe it is a useful and important field. It has been my dream since I was young to work in this area.

× There was really nice people and honest.

✓ There were really nice people and honest.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× I study in Istanbul, Istanbul European side.

✓ I study in Istanbul, on the European side of Istanbul.

The correct preposition to indicate a part of a city is 'on' and the phrase should be 'on the European side of Istanbul' for clarity.

× It is very like lawful statement in Istanbul.

✓ It is a very reputable institution in Istanbul.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect adjectives. 'Lawful statement' is not appropriate; 'reputable institution' fits the context better.

× Actually, I don't think somebody's a very good place to study because the streets are often dirty.

✓ Actually, I don't think it's a very good place to study because the streets are often dirty.

The pronoun 'somebody's' is incorrect here; 'it's' (it is) correctly refers to the place.

× The statement name was Ankara and there was a lovely university, but they didn't accept me because of my notes.

✓ The state's name was Ankara and there was a lovely university, but it didn't accept me because of my grades.

'Statement' should be 'state' or 'city'; 'they' refers to the university which is singular, so 'it' is correct; 'notes' should be 'grades' for academic context.

× Actually I would like to change the place near the mosque because it is it's breaking my concentrates in the class after afternoon.

✓ Actually, I would like to change the place near the mosque because it's breaking my concentration in class in the afternoon.

'Concentrates' is incorrect; 'concentration' is the noun needed. 'After afternoon' is incorrect; 'in the afternoon' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Actually afternoon they usually prayers shots loudly and we cannot concentrate to class and even teachers sometimes yelling when when they trying to talk.

✓ Actually, in the afternoon they usually pray loudly and we cannot concentrate in class, and even teachers sometimes yell when they try to talk.

'Prayers shots' is incorrect; 'pray loudly' is correct. 'Concentrate to class' should be 'concentrate in class'. 'Yelling when when they trying' should be 'yell when they try' for correct verb forms and removal of repetition.

× I would like to study tourism translation because I think that facilitate it is too much good, too much substantial for me and it was my dream since I was here.

✓ I would like to study tourism translation because I think that it is very good and very important for me, and it has been my dream since I was here.

'Facilitate it is too much good, too much substantial' is incorrect; 'it is very good and very important' is clearer. 'It was my dream since I was here' should be 'it has been my dream since I was here' to indicate ongoing relevance.