Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法有错误，如“a prestigious schools”应为“a prestigious school”，且句子较长，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复信息。

Exemplo: I am a graduate student at Sichuan University, a prestigious school in Chengdu. I chose it because of its excellent reputation.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a prestigious schools”应为“a prestigious school”，且表达重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法正确。

Exemplo: I study at Sichuan University, which is famous for its strong academic performance. Therefore, I believe it offers excellent opportunities for my studies.

Sugestão: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整，且用词不准确，如“It is easily for us to”不符合语法。建议完整表达观点，并使用准确的词汇和句子。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. The libraries provide a peaceful environment that helps me concentrate. Moreover, there are many resources available, which makes studying easier.

Sugestão: 句子中存在语法错误，如“make our more convenient”应为“make it more convenient for us”，表达不够准确。建议注意句子结构和用词准确性。

Exemplo: I hope our dormitory can have elevators because they would make it more convenient for us to move around, especially when carrying heavy items like luggage and groceries.

Sugestão: 回答较为清晰，但最后一句表达不够自然，“which school I will go”应为“which school I will attend”。建议使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: I am currently in my third year of postgraduate studies. After graduation, I plan to study abroad for a doctoral degree, but I haven't decided which university to attend yet.

× It is a prestigious schools that's the reason why I came here to continue my study.

✓ It is a prestigious school; that's the reason why I came here to continue my study.

schools 是复数形式，但前面用的是单数的 it is，应该用单数 school 来保持主谓一致。

× I study at Sichuan University which is a prestigious schools famous for its strong academic performance.

✓ I study at Sichuan University which is a prestigious school famous for its strong academic performance.

schools 是复数形式，但前面用的是单数的 is，应该用单数 school 来保持主谓一致。

× This is the reason why I chose there to pursue my studies.

✓ This is the reason why I chose it to pursue my studies.

动词 choose 后面直接接宾语，不能用介词 there，应该用代词 it 指代前面的学校。

× I believe studying here can provide me with excellent opportunity.

✓ I believe studying here can provide me with excellent opportunities.

opportunity 是可数名词，前面缺少冠词，且语境中应使用复数形式 opportunities 表示多种机会。

× It is easily for us to.

✓ It is easy for us to.

形容词 easy 用于表语，副词 easily 用法错误，且句子不完整，应改为 It is easy for us to。

× I hope our dormitory can be equipped with elevators because they can make our more convenient to move around, especially when I carry heavy things like luggage and groceries up and down the stairs.

✓ I hope our dormitory can be equipped with elevators because they can make it more convenient for us to move around, especially when I carry heavy things like luggage and groceries up and down the stairs.

our 后面缺少名词，应该是 it 指代 dormitory，且 convenient 后面需要加介词 for us。

× I plan to go abroad to pursue a doctoral degree, but I haven't made a decision about which school I will go.

✓ I plan to go abroad to pursue a doctoral degree, but I haven't made a decision about which school I will go to.

动词 go 后面需要加介词 to 表示方向，缺少 to 是错误的。