Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question with a simple topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "strange student" or "science yard."

Exemplo: I am currently a college student majoring in broadcasting and hosting in Malaysia. Compared to China, the teaching methods here are quite different, which helps me gain more knowledge.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like "talk each other."

Exemplo: I study in Malaysia, a beautiful country in Asia. Unlike China, people here mainly speak English and Malay, which makes communication a bit different.

Sugestão: Your answer is positive and includes supporting details, but some sentences are unclear or redundant. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the education quality.

Exemplo: Yes, Malaysia is a great place to study because the people and teachers are very friendly. Moreover, the weather is comfortable and the food is delicious. I also believe the education quality here is improving, which makes it an attractive choice for students.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence, then explain why using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "connect word to word" and "different basics."

Exemplo: I would like the study programs to include more languages because learning multiple languages helps broaden our horizons. This is important since languages connect people and cultures around the world.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "You know" and unclear expressions such as "step by step to study is very important basis skills to travel around." Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to pursue a PhD in Australia to deepen my knowledge and broaden my horizons. I believe that continuous learning is essential for personal and professional growth.

× Now I'm a student in college, I graduate in science yard but now I'm a strange student in Malaysia and as a student my major is broadcasting and hosting.

✓ Now I'm a student in college. I graduated in the science department, but now I'm an exchange student in Malaysia, and my major is broadcasting and hosting.

The original sentence has plural and singular noun issues such as 'science yard' which should be 'science department' and 'strange student' which should be 'exchange student'. Also, 'graduate' should be in past tense 'graduated' to indicate completed action. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× It's a great difference to study in China and Malaysia because they use different management to teach students how to get more knowledge.

✓ There is a great difference between studying in China and Malaysia because they use different methods to teach students how to gain more knowledge.

The phrase 'a great difference to study in China and Malaysia' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'difference between' when comparing two things. Also, 'management' is not the correct word here; 'methods' fits better. 'Get more knowledge' is better expressed as 'gain more knowledge'.

× A country in Asia that is Malaysia.

✓ I study in Malaysia, a country in Asia.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb, making it incomplete. The correction provides a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× It is different from China because they often use English and Malay to be their local languages, so it is a little bit different to talk each other.

✓ It is different from China because people often use English and Malay as their local languages, so it is a little bit difficult to communicate with each other.

The pronoun 'they' is ambiguous here; replacing it with 'people' clarifies the subject. Also, 'to be their local languages' is incorrect; 'as their local languages' is correct. 'Talk each other' should be 'communicate with each other' for proper usage.

× The food is tasty and fantastic.

✓ The food is tasty and fantastic.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× So I like the place very much and also the education is higher before so I think we can come here to study.

✓ So I like the place very much, and the education quality is better than before, so I think we can come here to study.

The phrase 'education is higher before' is incorrect. 'Education quality is better than before' correctly expresses improvement over time.

× For changes, I hope the study plans can use more languages to talk each other because it's a good way to broaden our horizons.

✓ For changes, I hope the study plans can include more languages to communicate with each other because it's a good way to broaden our horizons.

The phrase 'use more languages to talk each other' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'include more languages to communicate with each other'.

× You know that languages is the most important thing to connect word to word, but also to connect different basics and cultures.

✓ You know that language is the most important thing to connect word to word, but also to connect different basics and cultures.

The subject 'languages' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing subject-verb disagreement. Also, 'language' singular fits better here as a general concept. 'Basics' is unclear and may be better replaced with 'backgrounds' or 'foundations' but left as is due to instruction.

× You know, step by step to study is very important basis skills to travel around.

✓ You know, studying step by step is a very important basic skill for traveling around.

The phrase 'step by step to study' is awkward; 'studying step by step' is better. 'Basis skills' should be 'basic skill' (singular). 'To travel around' should be 'for traveling around' to indicate purpose.