Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct response first, then add supporting details with linking words to make it coherent. Avoid redundancy and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I am currently a student, but I also tutor some of my cousins part-time. So, you could say I have some teaching experience, although it's not my full-time job.

Sugestão: Your answer starts well but ends with an unclear phrase 'I have an elephant head' which confuses the listener. Make sure your sentences are clear and relevant. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I am currently pursuing a Bachelor's Honours degree in Zoology because I am fascinated by biology. This subject really interests me and motivates me to learn more.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but some sentences are unclear or grammatically incorrect, such as 'relentless place for study' and 'I am loving'. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because there are many students and the environment is very focused on learning. Moreover, the faculty members are very supportive and helpful, which makes my experience enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is vague and has unclear phrases like 'change the study types'. Be specific about what changes you want and explain why. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, although the place is generally good and students are disciplined, I would like the classes to start on time because delays of 20 to 30 minutes disrupt our learning. Therefore, improving the schedule would be beneficial.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but repetitive with 'I would love to go there'. Try to use varied vocabulary and combine sentences for fluency. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes.

Exemplo: After completing my BSc, I plan to pursue my master's degree abroad, preferably in the Netherlands or Denmark, as I believe these countries offer excellent education opportunities.

× I tutor some of my cousins so you can tell me I am a teacher also.

✓ I tutor some of my cousins, so you can say I am a teacher as well.

The phrase 'you can tell me' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'you can say'. Also, 'also' is better replaced with 'as well' for naturalness. This is a singular/plural and phrase usage issue.

× Not full time half time teacher also.

✓ Not a full-time, but a part-time teacher as well.

Missing articles and incorrect phrase structure. 'Not full time half time teacher also' lacks the article 'a' and needs hyphenation for 'full-time' and 'part-time'. Also, 'half time' is better expressed as 'part-time'. This is a singular/plural and article usage issue.

× I'm really fascinated by the biology subjects and I have an elephant head.

✓ I'm really fascinated by biology subjects, and I have an excellent memory.

The phrase 'I have an elephant head' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the student meant to say 'I have an excellent memory' or 'I have a good memory'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and idiomatic expression.

× So many students are there and it is a relentless place for study where I live and it is pretty much good.

✓ There are many students, and it is a relentless place for study where I live; it is pretty good.

The phrase 'So many students are there' is awkward; the correct structure is 'There are many students'. This is a 'There be' issue.

× The faculties are very supportive and they are so much helpful.

✓ The faculty is very supportive and very helpful.

'Faculties' should be singular 'faculty' when referring to the teaching staff collectively. Also, 'so much helpful' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'very helpful'. This is an adjective/adverb usage issue.

× I am loving.

✓ I am loving it.

The verb 'love' is a stative verb and is not usually used in the continuous form alone. The phrase 'I am loving' is incomplete; it should be 'I am loving it' or simply 'I love it'. This is an adjective/adverb usage and sentence structure issue.

× Sometimes the classes are like 20 to 30 minutes late and it affects us.

✓ Sometimes the classes start 20 to 30 minutes late, and it affects us.

The phrase 'are like 20 to 30 minutes late' is informal and awkward. The correct preposition and verb usage is 'start 20 to 30 minutes late'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× So I would like to change the study types.

✓ So I would like to change the study methods.

'Study types' is unclear and awkward. The correct phrase is 'study methods' or 'study styles'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/word choice issue.

× After completing my BSc, I would love to go abroad like Netherlands or Denmark.

✓ After completing my BSc, I would love to go abroad to the Netherlands or Denmark.

Country names like 'Netherlands' require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'go abroad like Netherlands' is incorrect; it should be 'go abroad to the Netherlands'. This is an article error.

× It is a my plan.

✓ It is my plan.

The phrase 'a my plan' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive adjective and does not need an article 'a'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/article error.