Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应注意语法完整性，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁明了地表达身份，例如："I am a graduate student majoring in Biology at Sichuan University."

Exemplo: I am a graduate student majoring in Biology at Sichuan University.

Sugestão: 回答时应注意句子结构完整，避免语法错误。可以使用连接词使回答更连贯，例如："I am studying at Sichuan University, which is located in Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan province. It is situated in the center of the province."

Exemplo: I am studying at Sichuan University, which is located in Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan province. It is situated in the center of the province.

Sugestão: 回答时应注意语法和表达的准确性，避免重复。可以简洁表达并使用连接词，例如："Yes, it is a good place to study because many students are dedicated to their studies, which creates a positive atmosphere."

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because many students are dedicated to their studies, which creates a positive atmosphere.

Sugestão: 回答时应注意句子结构和逻辑连贯，避免重复。可以使用连接词并表达清楚原因，例如："Yes, I would like the dormitory to be renovated to include elevators because it is inconvenient to carry things to our rooms without them."

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the dormitory to be renovated to include elevators because it is inconvenient to carry things to our rooms without them.

Sugestão: 回答时应注意语法完整和表达清晰。可以简洁明了地说明计划，例如："I am currently in my third year of postgraduate study, and next semester I plan to continue my studies. After that, I intend to go abroad to pursue a doctoral degree."

Exemplo: I am currently in my third year of postgraduate study, and next semester I plan to continue my studies. After that, I intend to go abroad to pursue a doctoral degree.

× I am a student a graduate student major in Biology at Sichuan University.

✓ I am a graduate student majoring in Biology at Sichuan University.

句子中“a student a graduate student”重复且不符合语法，应合并为“I am a graduate student”。此外，“major in”应改为“majoring in”，表示专业方向。

× It about in the center of Sichuan province.

✓ It is about in the center of Sichuan province.

句子缺少系动词“is”，导致句子不完整。应加上“is”使句子完整。

× Yes, actually it absolutely there are many students are there dedicated into their studies which provide positive atmosphere, atmosphere.

✓ Yes, actually there are many students who are dedicated to their studies, which provides a positive atmosphere.

原句结构混乱，重复使用“there are”和“are there”，且“dedicated into”用法错误，应为“dedicated to”。此外，“which provide”主谓不一致，应为“which provides”。

× Yes, absolutely. I hope the dormitory can be repaired with elevators because it is really convenient, inconvenient for us to carry something to our room, but if there is an elevator.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I hope the dormitory can be repaired to include elevators because it is really inconvenient for us to carry things to our rooms without an elevator.

“repaired with elevators”表达不准确，应为“repaired to include elevators”。“convenient, inconvenient”用法矛盾，应去掉“convenient”，并且“carry something to our room”应改为“carry things to our rooms”。

× I in the next semester I will. I am in the third year of postgraduate study and after that I'm going to go abroad for my doctor degree.

✓ Next semester, I will continue my studies. I am in the third year of my postgraduate study, and after that, I'm going to go abroad for my doctoral degree.

原句“ I in the next semester I will.”结构不完整，应调整为“Next semester, I will continue my studies.”此外，“doctor degree”应为“doctoral degree”。